tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post9177293880611799457..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: the patternScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79698725661466542122014-02-03T17:59:51.858-05:002014-02-03T17:59:51.858-05:00Footprints in the sky...lovely wondrous words. Bea...Footprints in the sky...lovely wondrous words. Beautiful writing.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-49001385885645554882014-02-03T13:54:07.976-05:002014-02-03T13:54:07.976-05:00I like the double slash opposition repetition, how...I like the double slash opposition repetition, how it reinforces and emphasizes the pulse of love. Been away the weekend visiting an very ill aunt - last days, really - so unable to write or post. I quite like K's prompt, and expect it will ruminate until something pops out. Good week to you, Grace - I start the week having turned 49 today! It's brisk but sunny here ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72287172264318281152014-02-03T12:41:09.696-05:002014-02-03T12:41:09.696-05:00That's beautiful and serene in one hand and pa...That's beautiful and serene in one hand and passionate on the other. Always loved your poetry Grace, but this one is special. Smiles. Almost lost myself reading through the lines. Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-75845452810799292362014-02-03T06:28:43.183-05:002014-02-03T06:28:43.183-05:00Beautifully written!Beautifully written!Bing Yaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01562123246667338670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67329856914559889402014-02-02T18:16:58.900-05:002014-02-02T18:16:58.900-05:00Wow. This is powerful. I love how you talk about l...Wow. This is powerful. I love how you talk about looking in the sky for your footprints. It just made me think of so much. Ts a really inspirational phrase :) And your last stanza was my favorte.... i love the wild picture it portrays! I could imagine a pair of raucous lovers, alive and burning eachother with their powerful passion *.* Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40057788930224541112014-02-02T12:32:04.320-05:002014-02-02T12:32:04.320-05:00I looked for my footprints in the sky, but all I f...I looked for my footprints in the sky, but all I found was fingerprints on the moon.<br /><br />I think this is about computers and typing! To me, anyway. And maybe a blog template? :) Very open to musing on this.<br /><br />I love how there is a garden in this too. <br /><br />xoxoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-23996860356419389122014-02-02T04:00:38.309-05:002014-02-02T04:00:38.309-05:00ah! lovely piece...ah! lovely piece...ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88030634411131052282014-02-02T02:23:29.912-05:002014-02-02T02:23:29.912-05:00Luscious in it's romantic repetitive cross- cr...Luscious in it's romantic repetitive cross- crossing form Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-25135266128827565262014-02-02T02:01:28.895-05:002014-02-02T02:01:28.895-05:00So beautiful.................So beautiful.................Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-45014293840696014562014-02-01T23:43:33.518-05:002014-02-01T23:43:33.518-05:00I love all of the sounds in this poem, makes for g...I love all of the sounds in this poem, makes for great reading. Especially love the lines "our love vacillates between liquid & air<br />- is chaos & choir, beautifully unbroken" - Brilliant!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-35121226121003845852014-02-01T22:08:02.473-05:002014-02-01T22:08:02.473-05:00Follow those prints with slow motion kisses, works...Follow those prints with slow motion kisses, works for me. Great built up at your seaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28480551567435295282014-02-01T20:39:11.993-05:002014-02-01T20:39:11.993-05:00That was lovely Heaven.
......dholeThat was lovely Heaven. <br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2137025483059651422014-02-01T20:02:47.761-05:002014-02-01T20:02:47.761-05:00The first few stanzas of this are really hypnotic,...The first few stanzas of this are really hypnotic, Heaven, and the structure is repetitive, but not a drone, more of an accent. I think you may have meant a car, but for some reason I was seeing an old foot-pedal sewing machine, women with backs bent, sewing and sewing as the needles went up and down--the middle is a calm interlude and the end, a nice splash of release. Enjoyed it very much.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-75624085228108361182014-02-01T19:16:33.817-05:002014-02-01T19:16:33.817-05:00i liked the interaction of writer and environment....i liked the interaction of writer and environment... and the gentle pace Wolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-37762888050274713302014-02-01T19:00:06.670-05:002014-02-01T19:00:06.670-05:00You work the theme of repitition into a weave here...You work the theme of repitition into a weave here that picks up every motion and completes it into the dance of love. Your poems are becoming such lovely graceful gifts, Grace.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10197566607867742092014-02-01T18:55:43.713-05:002014-02-01T18:55:43.713-05:00So beautiful Grace, love the perfect close.So beautiful Grace, love the perfect close.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63697997227279752472014-02-01T18:41:13.047-05:002014-02-01T18:41:13.047-05:00Not the tedium, but the night yes ~ Thanks Bjorn ...Not the tedium, but the night yes ~ Thanks Bjorn ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-36805024800610811182014-02-01T18:40:24.881-05:002014-02-01T18:40:24.881-05:00I like that we are writing about sounds too Jason ...I like that we are writing about sounds too Jason ~ Thanks for the visit ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67992426322696093132014-02-01T18:39:49.423-05:002014-02-01T18:39:49.423-05:00Thanks M ~Thanks M ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10622275173317779572014-02-01T18:36:00.468-05:002014-02-01T18:36:00.468-05:00A day with footprints in the sky.. a day that ends...A day with footprints in the sky.. a day that ends so far from tic-toc and click-clack.. and bell-curves... sounds like a day to repeat.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-25033130042875067222014-02-01T17:40:22.865-05:002014-02-01T17:40:22.865-05:00I love all of the 'tip-taps' and 'clic...I love all of the 'tip-taps' and 'click-clacks' in this piece-- it is such a wonderfully sculpted poem with ridges along the smooth curves that not only do NOT disrupt the flow but rather create the texture which is so inviting, the 'pattern' you have laid out for us to spread ourselves on. Top-notch. ~peace, JasonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-55856404417449153802014-02-01T17:27:54.606-05:002014-02-01T17:27:54.606-05:00The rhythm of this is perfect for the message. The...The rhythm of this is perfect for the message. The syncopation is the same as the rhythm of life; disjointed in it's regularity, full of tension and variation of cadence. Lovely Grace.Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4359367611446021042014-02-01T17:08:28.226-05:002014-02-01T17:08:28.226-05:00Goodness, you are up early Kelvin ~ Thank you for...Goodness, you are up early Kelvin ~ Thank you for the lovely words ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22114048842754295892014-02-01T17:07:12.161-05:002014-02-01T17:07:12.161-05:00Thank you Glenn ~Thank you Glenn ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-15404561197126076602014-02-01T17:06:46.030-05:002014-02-01T17:06:46.030-05:00Thanks K ~Thanks K ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com