tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post9174102633057214096..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Beneath the skinScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74051751789129119922013-06-21T02:07:23.454-04:002013-06-21T02:07:23.454-04:00opened my eyes
and saw veins & muscles &...<i> opened my eyes<br /> and saw veins & muscles & cells <br /><br />of nameless people</i><br /><br />one of the finest from you :) <br />loved every line of it !!Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8773176716648987812013-06-18T10:50:36.298-04:002013-06-18T10:50:36.298-04:00Wow! I felt every word of this.Wow! I felt every word of this.Ben Dittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637997946476963455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72197092549020013732013-06-17T17:13:11.513-04:002013-06-17T17:13:11.513-04:00colored of ink & stories, i hid from everyone
...colored of ink & stories, i hid from everyone<br /> as if i was a freak, too sensitive, too pained to see the aches- <br /><br />i harmed myself until you knocked at my door <br /><br />This is so much more than a passion poem ... it is about accepting oneself, I think ... although it seems it comes through the eyes of another - Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62914284036336465182013-06-17T07:52:45.457-04:002013-06-17T07:52:45.457-04:00an exotic read Grace - sublime - thank youan exotic read Grace - sublime - thank youAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10020430647050532416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-48919122050573626292013-06-17T06:28:22.871-04:002013-06-17T06:28:22.871-04:00Grace,
Beauty disclosed under the layers of human...Grace,<br /><br />Beauty disclosed under the layers of human flesh..what is left is a naked soul..nothing to hide. Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-51205740777091387672013-06-16T15:47:24.651-04:002013-06-16T15:47:24.651-04:00Beauty is everywhere, indeed.
(Blossom formerly ...Beauty is everywhere, indeed. <br />(Blossom formerly Dolce Mela) :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6162979736678136962013-06-16T07:35:01.940-04:002013-06-16T07:35:01.940-04:00Grace, I like the anatomical side in your poem...a...Grace, I like the anatomical side in your poem...and sense of humor, sprinkle from there for me...humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61803499879348133792013-06-16T06:29:43.485-04:002013-06-16T06:29:43.485-04:00Beautifully handled. Exquisite.
Beautifully handled. Exquisite.<br />Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-54883911069135600032013-06-16T05:48:39.799-04:002013-06-16T05:48:39.799-04:00your bones are softer than i thought,
your pe...your bones are softer than i thought,<br /> your pelvic on mine, an exquisite canvas <br />as you kiss me close, all my pores and glands,<br /> open & beat to your overture, your tongue <br /><br />Sensuously beautiful it cannot be any better. Great imagery and word choice ,Grace!<br /><br />Hank<br />kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80174434281777767742013-06-16T04:52:48.074-04:002013-06-16T04:52:48.074-04:00WOW!! I am breathing deeper after holding my brea...WOW!! I am breathing deeper after holding my breath and then hyperventilating. Your poem exercised me to link the beauty of bones (covered in life) with the grace of passion. <br /><br />I am learning that the beauty of aging hands does not come without pain.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79345564924212155072013-06-16T03:47:09.016-04:002013-06-16T03:47:09.016-04:00Grace you've done wonders with the contrasts h...Grace you've done wonders with the contrasts here.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88277162501756044462013-06-15T23:37:23.189-04:002013-06-15T23:37:23.189-04:00merveilleuxmerveilleuxgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-77518472309981252542013-06-15T22:43:05.272-04:002013-06-15T22:43:05.272-04:00You amaze me Grace with the suppleness of words yo...You amaze me Grace with the suppleness of words you choose for an emotion. Fantastic!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33121703708783757962013-06-15T22:10:16.030-04:002013-06-15T22:10:16.030-04:00True, there is a lot of beauty beneath the surface...True, there is a lot of beauty beneath the surface. Not too many would be able to love or be loved if they only focused on surface beauty. <br /><br />You write with so much vulnerability and passion, Grace. :-) Wonderful. <br /><br />~ImeldaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-31791662260913060062013-06-15T19:30:28.487-04:002013-06-15T19:30:28.487-04:00Such vulnerability you express! Thank you; it'...Such vulnerability you express! Thank you; it's beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19948841474046466402013-06-15T19:20:21.905-04:002013-06-15T19:20:21.905-04:00you sure went deep into the human body today, in a...you sure went deep into the human body today, in a beautiful way. Although that pic can be kinda creepy too, zombies ate them dry? lolPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-86689225429490598142013-06-15T18:43:53.495-04:002013-06-15T18:43:53.495-04:00I like the creative contrast from
the first movin...I like the creative contrast from <br />the first moving to the human form.<br /> Creative and well done. Pic fits. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60774156036686312442013-06-15T18:37:49.066-04:002013-06-15T18:37:49.066-04:00Beautiful write.... Vivid imagery, soft and sensua...Beautiful write.... Vivid imagery, soft and sensual... A very creative piece Heaven...1ManViewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17896979433381268598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-70315613112763487222013-06-15T17:53:24.722-04:002013-06-15T17:53:24.722-04:00I agree great job on the contrasts and imagery.I agree great job on the contrasts and imagery.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-17844751591753218892013-06-15T17:50:21.545-04:002013-06-15T17:50:21.545-04:00I, too, like the vivid contrasts... so beautiful.I, too, like the vivid contrasts... so beautiful.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58560798626757298492013-06-15T17:37:14.288-04:002013-06-15T17:37:14.288-04:00lots of lovely poetical images lots of lovely poetical images DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19717619587315616242013-06-15T17:27:07.543-04:002013-06-15T17:27:07.543-04:00Beautiful as usual Grace, I adoe the photo and the...Beautiful as usual Grace, I adoe the photo and the lyrics seem like an amazing prompt for that.Outcasthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03400755239612162157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-57859787053425177352013-06-15T17:08:22.747-04:002013-06-15T17:08:22.747-04:00How beautiful to take the dissected reality of the...How beautiful to take the dissected reality of the body and contrast/merge it with the beauty of human love. Although I find such incredible beauty in the whole mystery of the body (except for when I had to watch autopsies in nursing school)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-65144531415107975272013-06-15T17:00:41.179-04:002013-06-15T17:00:41.179-04:00Love uniting in the emotional and physical...no gr...Love uniting in the emotional and physical...no greater beauty for mere mortals, I think. Wonderful from the first to the last, Grace.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09450346739275578678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-16613454465871299982013-06-15T16:27:47.591-04:002013-06-15T16:27:47.591-04:00a great journey you took in your poem... i love ha...a great journey you took in your poem... i love happy endings... ;)<br />beautiful - as always, Grace.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com