tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post8882866572615584330..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: What I want to do with youScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10713632727892243932013-05-09T09:47:19.236-04:002013-05-09T09:47:19.236-04:00Wonderful ... the end a delightful surprize.Wonderful ... the end a delightful surprize.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63432969001770546552013-05-09T03:49:10.601-04:002013-05-09T03:49:10.601-04:00This is beautiful. I love it!This is beautiful. I love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13170146700751042982013-05-09T00:15:23.976-04:002013-05-09T00:15:23.976-04:00This is beautiful:
not one blushing petal nor sma...This is beautiful:<br /><br />not one blushing petal nor small bud<br /> but a thousand pink-gaping pearls bloomingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79187087801791972202013-05-08T23:44:31.902-04:002013-05-08T23:44:31.902-04:00Incredibly sensual poem powerful images. Incredibly sensual poem powerful images. Linda Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10387405429395292887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80129912860584781872013-05-08T21:00:35.713-04:002013-05-08T21:00:35.713-04:00Gorgeous and lilting, Grace.
PamelaGorgeous and lilting, Grace.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78988510331355331882013-05-08T20:27:21.565-04:002013-05-08T20:27:21.565-04:00Melting my walls into a cup.... Just lovely. Melting my walls into a cup.... Just lovely. mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-57733675720298112392013-05-08T19:11:35.321-04:002013-05-08T19:11:35.321-04:00Beautiful!Beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58173887817919503352013-05-08T18:29:33.222-04:002013-05-08T18:29:33.222-04:00Gorgeous.Gorgeous.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42112307838298602012013-05-08T12:57:02.037-04:002013-05-08T12:57:02.037-04:00How can you not read a poem with a title like that...How can you not read a poem with a title like that - and it doesn't disappoint.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67228272357489035972013-05-08T10:53:22.608-04:002013-05-08T10:53:22.608-04:00Wonderful! I especially loved "my hair among ...Wonderful! I especially loved "my hair among the leaves, steeped<br /> of sun and morning dew drops"Jenny Hernerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15884658886582080587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74425507659434105012013-05-08T08:24:39.562-04:002013-05-08T08:24:39.562-04:00"I want to do with you what spring does with ..."I want to do with you what spring does with cherry trees......." Wonderful line.... Pablo could certainly find them and I love how you seemlessly incrporated that into desire. Though now I want a slice of cherry pie. Or to be young again so I could sit in her branches and just feast on her fruit as I often did as a child.... Nice poem...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-57078230220191974752013-05-08T03:49:50.218-04:002013-05-08T03:49:50.218-04:00Good take on the inspiration ... I loved how you a...Good take on the inspiration ... I loved how you adapted it to fit your style ... beautiful !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78917637008302006582013-05-07T22:51:54.106-04:002013-05-07T22:51:54.106-04:00Such passion in this. I love your inspiration, you...Such passion in this. I love your inspiration, your adaptation!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30069125536755042332013-05-07T22:37:10.414-04:002013-05-07T22:37:10.414-04:00Love those beautiful pink petals and your words ar...Love those beautiful pink petals and your words are soft and gentle and very sensuous as usual! You set the scene so beautifully here.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13646917707699645492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60584016268804577292013-05-07T22:29:15.180-04:002013-05-07T22:29:15.180-04:00Your poem is so sensuous. :-) Your poem is so sensuous. :-) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52495029850006756542013-05-07T22:25:48.575-04:002013-05-07T22:25:48.575-04:00The title got my attention straight away. Very in...The title got my attention straight away. Very intriging and warm in an enjoyable way. Excellente as always.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-21251690696356743072013-05-07T21:41:15.122-04:002013-05-07T21:41:15.122-04:00Wow... this paints such a sensuous and beautiful m...Wow... this paints such a sensuous and beautiful moment. Happy Spring!!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-12992208592571633802013-05-07T20:49:20.178-04:002013-05-07T20:49:20.178-04:00Well this is just delicious. Happy Spring indeed!Well this is just delicious. Happy Spring indeed!aka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-45068027942527823942013-05-07T20:04:36.664-04:002013-05-07T20:04:36.664-04:00I love the way you capture the tone of the of the...I love the way you capture the tone of the of the Neruda poem. I also love the way that nature and your psyche seem to fuse and you become part of its enduring cycle. The poem has such a sweet, lovely, lyrical music.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91282816174052272492013-05-07T19:57:17.851-04:002013-05-07T19:57:17.851-04:00Spring fever talk and action, hmm? What a good ma...Spring fever talk and action, hmm? What a good match between you and Neruda!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42341394001859195632013-05-07T19:54:49.718-04:002013-05-07T19:54:49.718-04:00I am not a fan of Neruda. Your poem is much better...I am not a fan of Neruda. Your poem is much better...more elegant and restrained..in fact I think his last line spoils it.<br />Just sayin':)<br />Lovely lovely poem.Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-18831935452243932032013-05-07T17:04:58.442-04:002013-05-07T17:04:58.442-04:00What a beautiful way to take off with the lines of...What a beautiful way to take off with the lines of inspiration. cammies on the floorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16586868507532830934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-50598817350876734402013-05-07T16:35:25.665-04:002013-05-07T16:35:25.665-04:00So very lovely - like the cherry blossom which is ...So very lovely - like the cherry blossom which is everywhere at the moment.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83166711113224150002013-05-07T16:28:34.494-04:002013-05-07T16:28:34.494-04:00Sensuality at its best: "drink deeply
of my ...Sensuality at its best: "drink deeply <br />of my fragrance, write love letters on my <br />skin, naked earth-" niiiiice :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10094116226854880072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32201682017975616912013-05-07T16:22:56.764-04:002013-05-07T16:22:56.764-04:00Wow, just wow. The textures, the passion. Oh, and ...Wow, just wow. The textures, the passion. Oh, and I just love Pablo! wow, I think I need to catch my breath! Is it hot in here? Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06411710113371026360noreply@blogger.com