tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post8810169898094690125..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Tanka poems: Succulent Scarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-47269861952257033392013-10-02T01:12:22.158-04:002013-10-02T01:12:22.158-04:00Breathtaking tankas!Breathtaking tankas!Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13553045238289280332013-09-27T15:22:25.397-04:002013-09-27T15:22:25.397-04:00love this style, and you did it with skilllove this style, and you did it with skillBrother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-17101101063558807982013-09-24T11:47:17.138-04:002013-09-24T11:47:17.138-04:00I liked how you transitioned in the poem, Grace. ...I liked how you transitioned in the poem, Grace. Very well done. As always, thank you!<br /><br />Have a beautiful week!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-53003533921722402752013-09-23T08:04:48.678-04:002013-09-23T08:04:48.678-04:00"What is the colour of longing?" What a..."What is the colour of longing?" What a fantastic turning line. All three are lovely and rich. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4199164226648188002013-09-22T21:12:45.123-04:002013-09-22T21:12:45.123-04:00I love the idea of a stolen night!
YOURS is sooo r...I love the idea of a stolen night!<br />YOURS is sooo romantic!<br />Very sensual :DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63218470983111237982013-09-22T14:59:17.294-04:002013-09-22T14:59:17.294-04:00SORRY, must have been thinking about Shay. Tanka,...SORRY, must have been thinking about Shay. Tanka, of course.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22197953942629070542013-09-22T14:58:06.955-04:002013-09-22T14:58:06.955-04:00Grace, this is delicious, delightful haiku ...Grace, this is delicious, delightful haiku ...Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30787659624575614592013-09-22T14:45:35.061-04:002013-09-22T14:45:35.061-04:00There is an ease, a natural sense of the erotic in...There is an ease, a natural sense of the erotic in your work, Grace. Lovely.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62535904853266879592013-09-22T13:37:55.755-04:002013-09-22T13:37:55.755-04:00Grace, now u can follow my art at https://www.face...Grace, now u can follow my art at https://www.facebook.com/ashokism.ashokashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-21777845699031933992013-09-22T12:11:43.042-04:002013-09-22T12:11:43.042-04:00That last one is breathtaking!That last one is breathtaking!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-23425584831509381932013-09-22T11:42:21.073-04:002013-09-22T11:42:21.073-04:00Your poems are quite like Picasso's drawings !...Your poems are quite like Picasso's drawings !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-50747595529636787182013-09-22T08:52:22.438-04:002013-09-22T08:52:22.438-04:00Thank you for the additional note on tanka form Bj...Thank you for the additional note on tanka form Bjorn ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60874827329833014502013-09-22T07:45:00.845-04:002013-09-22T07:45:00.845-04:00I adore these so much Heaven, incredible as usual....I adore these so much Heaven, incredible as usual.Outcasthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03400755239612162157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44593079700401281002013-09-22T04:23:10.863-04:002013-09-22T04:23:10.863-04:00I absolutely love all three.. I read another artic...I absolutely love all three.. I read another article that tanka was written as a kind of thank you notes after a night with a lover... that's so obvious throughout.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8767023713595031462013-09-22T03:20:41.125-04:002013-09-22T03:20:41.125-04:00this are really lovely.. i can't chose a favou...this are really lovely.. i can't chose a favourite.. you paint the picture and emotions so well.. love it.NataĊĦekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-5058404868733999852013-09-22T02:08:24.647-04:002013-09-22T02:08:24.647-04:00"your verses tremble on weathered lips" ..."your verses tremble on weathered lips" love that. Such beautiful writing!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24884265696465785702013-09-22T00:19:14.887-04:002013-09-22T00:19:14.887-04:00"unfurls soft palette: lavender"
"p..."unfurls soft palette: lavender"<br />"plum flowers bloom ..."<br />and more and more color! The brown and peach missing the purples ....<br /><br />How exquisite.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-76190524298342792252013-09-21T23:45:55.090-04:002013-09-21T23:45:55.090-04:00Lovely-- I especially like the last. Thanks, grac...Lovely-- I especially like the last. Thanks, grace. K. Of Manicddaily.Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-29990993492233125082013-09-21T20:58:50.189-04:002013-09-21T20:58:50.189-04:00The color of longing great line indeed, wonder wha...The color of longing great line indeed, wonder what one would truly take seedPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-38807129574908701462013-09-21T19:51:54.618-04:002013-09-21T19:51:54.618-04:00This triplet is poignant each in their own magical...This triplet is poignant each in their own magical viewpoint. Lovely!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72335041974141711122013-09-21T15:22:34.547-04:002013-09-21T15:22:34.547-04:00nice, Grace! smoooooth.nice, Grace! smoooooth.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71022328546584549562013-09-21T15:09:13.463-04:002013-09-21T15:09:13.463-04:00You are a whiz at this form, Grace! You achieve th...You are a whiz at this form, Grace! You achieve the elegant simplicity of tanka while conveying such strong emotion. Beautiful!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44126960406872019032013-09-21T14:39:37.839-04:002013-09-21T14:39:37.839-04:00liquid and smooth, Heaven... hope you have a good ...liquid and smooth, Heaven... hope you have a good weekend ~ MAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24825433616406122062013-09-21T14:39:07.993-04:002013-09-21T14:39:07.993-04:00Thank you Brian ~Thank you Brian ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-20014523547074746522013-09-21T14:37:49.285-04:002013-09-21T14:37:49.285-04:00I like your perspective Dezzy ~ I like your perspective Dezzy ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com