tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post821384340282168494..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Preparing to fallScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9752782950196354092012-11-28T10:35:30.659-05:002012-11-28T10:35:30.659-05:00Oh Grace, how aptly you are named! Your narrator,...Oh Grace, how aptly you are named! Your narrator, whether sky or sweat or earth or a single woman is telling a true story in the graceful sweep of couplets. We have two eyes, of course, but tears are not symmetrical.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-11553328800025694022012-11-26T15:38:54.457-05:002012-11-26T15:38:54.457-05:00every time i read you grace, your words...
just g...every time i read you grace, your words...<br /><br />just get more sublime.<br /><br />xxxjust a girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16826785377760697389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78205709996627916922012-11-26T14:35:01.719-05:002012-11-26T14:35:01.719-05:00you make me read and read again your words ..
they...you make me read and read again your words ..<br />they seduce and tempt me no end ..<br />Loved this one all the more ..Pratibhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060001943746107173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43850257157203034552012-11-26T03:26:13.037-05:002012-11-26T03:26:13.037-05:00strong thoughts here Grace, really tied in perfect...strong thoughts here Grace, really tied in perfectly with the seasonal imagery choices throughout. Great write. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62736722895232974452012-11-25T18:39:30.495-05:002012-11-25T18:39:30.495-05:00Falling with style is damn near flying.
A lovely w...Falling with style is damn near flying.<br />A lovely write, Grace<br />Melancholy well spiced<br />Far Beyond The Ridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05854741339081490896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-73364641162428403682012-11-25T17:35:11.863-05:002012-11-25T17:35:11.863-05:00I can almost see this about to fall. :-)I can almost see this about to fall. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-47145174876143867712012-11-25T08:23:41.240-05:002012-11-25T08:23:41.240-05:00I definitely can relate to the sting of separation...I definitely can relate to the sting of separation. I had no idea how sharp it could be, nor how uunprepared for it I was. Awesome write, Grace!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/11/24/i-thought-i-was-ready/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34609421016409350362012-11-25T06:58:33.310-05:002012-11-25T06:58:33.310-05:00no mental preparation is adequate
for the sharp cu...no mental preparation is adequate<br />for the sharp cut of separation, raw-stained <br /><br />So true. The whole poem rings true.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-795428443647251102012-11-25T03:43:30.739-05:002012-11-25T03:43:30.739-05:00some tight images...the hands of frost on the thro...some tight images...the hands of frost on the throat...the pain stinging..the water flooding the fragile chest..in those moments we well our fragility in full force i thinkClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-70300794980176769062012-11-25T02:28:20.986-05:002012-11-25T02:28:20.986-05:00a beautiful and moving piece Ga beautiful and moving piece Gashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-65949645310223829622012-11-24T23:39:09.948-05:002012-11-24T23:39:09.948-05:00Lovely word pictures in this. Other's say dea...Lovely word pictures in this. Other's say death, I pictured the end of a love affair and know that intention of "handling" it well. I'd say you are sweeping gracefully.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-76303976139753082312012-11-24T21:36:44.839-05:002012-11-24T21:36:44.839-05:00Sweet lust, and yet I read it as Sweet death. Just...Sweet lust, and yet I read it as Sweet death. Just goes to show where my mind is.<br /><br />Honestly though, I saw it, as I read, the letting go of life in that moment when you know it is gone. . .<br /><br />Sorry, had a heart attack two years ago, it took me back there...<br /><br />Beautifully done!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10489176593056560752012-11-24T20:09:52.949-05:002012-11-24T20:09:52.949-05:00Go right ahead...I have no problems with it..he..h...Go right ahead...I have no problems with it..he..he....<br /><br />Thanks for visit Susan ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-55432545962357180872012-11-24T20:02:31.970-05:002012-11-24T20:02:31.970-05:00Grace--this is so beautifully written. However, i...Grace--this is so beautifully written. However, it is also so gorgeously sensual that I just want to roll around in the words and images again, instead of writing an intelligent comment about it. Shame on me--that is exactly what I'm going to do.Susan Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13241514922366571247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-15962890619948463302012-11-24T19:46:44.777-05:002012-11-24T19:46:44.777-05:00Thanks for the support and encouragement Sherry ~Thanks for the support and encouragement Sherry ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40618790631159311352012-11-24T19:46:26.550-05:002012-11-24T19:46:26.550-05:00Thank you dear Dezzy ~Thank you dear Dezzy ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91475993277723699762012-11-24T19:46:04.855-05:002012-11-24T19:46:04.855-05:00I appreciate your lovely words Ben ~ Thanks ~I appreciate your lovely words Ben ~ Thanks ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-84570938863855707452012-11-24T19:45:46.041-05:002012-11-24T19:45:46.041-05:00Thank you for the visit ~ Thank you for the visit ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-90671653209915101612012-11-24T19:19:01.242-05:002012-11-24T19:19:01.242-05:00Thank you for the lovely words and visit Matthew ~...Thank you for the lovely words and visit Matthew ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-59072459898753538002012-11-24T19:05:04.048-05:002012-11-24T19:05:04.048-05:00This is beautifully, beautifully written! Every li...This is beautifully, beautifully written! Every line flowing beautifully down the page, culminating in a perfect closing line.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7545735911660960552012-11-24T19:03:35.997-05:002012-11-24T19:03:35.997-05:00Thank you for the visit ~ Nice to meet you ~ Thank you for the visit ~ Nice to meet you ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8588462274293362862012-11-24T19:03:14.229-05:002012-11-24T19:03:14.229-05:00Yes, the coming of winter ~ Thanks for the visit ...Yes, the coming of winter ~ Thanks for the visit Ellecee ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-31443498516349321482012-11-24T19:02:43.275-05:002012-11-24T19:02:43.275-05:00Thank you for the lovely words ~
Nice to meet you...Thank you for the lovely words ~<br /><br />Nice to meet you ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9328093835953724562012-11-24T18:49:52.863-05:002012-11-24T18:49:52.863-05:00duvet of gathering night - love that one, Grace!duvet of gathering night - love that one, Grace!DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34597438819849603462012-11-24T18:42:56.130-05:002012-11-24T18:42:56.130-05:00The color and emotion work incredibly together.The color and emotion work incredibly together.Ben Dittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637997946476963455noreply@blogger.com