tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post8018164493154201843..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Still beautifulScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-64585789018283870792011-11-16T22:22:50.132-05:002011-11-16T22:22:50.132-05:00Heaven, truly a fabulous treat reading this. I ac...Heaven, truly a fabulous treat reading this. I actually read this three times, enjoyed it that much. Love what you crafted here. Very, very nice. I am just starting to read other poets and so thrilled you were the first. I have a lot of catching up to do. Thank you for your visit and comment. Have a wonderful day.California Ink in Motionhttp://themslvh.wordpress.com/2011/11/12/concrete-hive/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-54854051185279072162011-10-22T16:35:01.500-04:002011-10-22T16:35:01.500-04:00Nearly all your writing is from the heart - that&#...Nearly all your writing is from the heart - that's why it's so good... // Peter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-92000131128448802932011-10-22T15:58:01.474-04:002011-10-22T15:58:01.474-04:00powerful message sent with sexy ideas, superb writ...powerful message sent with sexy ideas, superb writing.Hyde Park Poetry Palacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-18355842484269644402011-10-22T13:00:29.451-04:002011-10-22T13:00:29.451-04:00very enjoyable.very enjoyable.Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28488252882223541842011-10-21T14:03:00.069-04:002011-10-21T14:03:00.069-04:00Love the sensuality of this pieceLove the sensuality of this pieceBajanpoethttp://poetwhispers.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33755306169152222782011-10-19T09:14:20.074-04:002011-10-19T09:14:20.074-04:00mmm... beautiful!mmm... beautiful!hotspicywings@yahoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-73045178463134228672011-10-17T07:22:42.286-04:002011-10-17T07:22:42.286-04:00I could feel the "otherness" in the sett...I could feel the "otherness" in the setting of your poem. Very sensual. Nicely done.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-3166978250750841912011-10-17T00:24:06.061-04:002011-10-17T00:24:06.061-04:00this is such a beautiful, intimate write..I had to...this is such a beautiful, intimate write..I had to pause when I read your commentary regarding your home visit. A wonderful, creative metaphor for when we revisit what we have lost ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-86581496375330318792011-10-16T19:49:47.146-04:002011-10-16T19:49:47.146-04:00Love these lines: "kiss gently at first tryin...Love these lines: "kiss gently at first trying to <br />remember how it was"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24382653559649023762011-10-16T17:31:07.280-04:002011-10-16T17:31:07.280-04:00Your writing is always good. This reads so well an...Your writing is always good. This reads so well and is soo..sensual. Yet, distant. I like the wordplay with all the veggies.<br /><br />http://seeworldhere.wordpress.com/2011/10/16/our-world-today-they-know/Sharon Rose Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05978390292247630316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63679076647252313072011-10-16T13:41:06.841-04:002011-10-16T13:41:06.841-04:00Oh ... thank you for turning me on to dVerse!Oh ... thank you for turning me on to dVerse!Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13319747788954176152011-10-16T13:40:18.697-04:002011-10-16T13:40:18.697-04:00This poem is beautifully sensual, filled with sexu...This poem is beautifully sensual, filled with sexuality, longing, sadness and tenderness. It was a pleasure to read.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10526687144349302932011-10-16T11:54:44.367-04:002011-10-16T11:54:44.367-04:00Intimate, sensual and exciting.Intimate, sensual and exciting.JANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7192242843145491822011-10-16T11:12:07.578-04:002011-10-16T11:12:07.578-04:00This is undoubtably hot and sensual and satisfying...This is undoubtably hot and sensual and satisfying-wraps me in a blanket-<br /><br />you do this so well heaven but this from me stands out as you introduce and intersperse some great lines that juxtapose the above ideals "labels stitched on our foreheads'<br /><br />fantastic - this gives proportion and awards I'd be the dynamic to your work<br /><br />stylishly sexy surrealArron Shillinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17989854352644796752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60553988433147698072011-10-16T10:57:36.332-04:002011-10-16T10:57:36.332-04:00Hello.
This is sensual & tender...a reminder t...Hello.<br />This is sensual & tender...a reminder that love, wherever it happens, is beautiful.<br /><br />Nice write, Heaven.<br />Thanks for sharing.<br /><br /><a href="http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/10/bashful-lady.html" rel="nofollow">Bashful Lady</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-51260950938168593182011-10-16T09:24:05.534-04:002011-10-16T09:24:05.534-04:00This was a sensual treat to read, and your explana...This was a sensual treat to read, and your explanation made it even moreso!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-68919589238078317422011-10-16T07:29:56.641-04:002011-10-16T07:29:56.641-04:00Deep emotional and beautiful journey ...to love so...Deep emotional and beautiful journey ...to love someone across the ocean that you have not seen in a long time.... then to see them again and feel the same even though distance and time stands in your way. Love this.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-55534827154944142082011-10-16T04:03:22.675-04:002011-10-16T04:03:22.675-04:00making love to a country...remembering how it was....making love to a country...remembering how it was..discovering the beauty in the ugliness...i likeClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-87871093471208106662011-10-15T22:35:33.896-04:002011-10-15T22:35:33.896-04:00I love the last lines.I love the last lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-85349990169941157512011-10-15T22:26:36.560-04:002011-10-15T22:26:36.560-04:00Thank you for the wonderful comments.
You might a...Thank you for the wonderful comments.<br /><br />You might as well ask me..what is fearless about my post? It is also about loving another person, "oceans apart", and finding him or her beautiful despite "rough, blistered palms." To love, despite challenges, is fearless to me.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63564017180771642492011-10-15T22:18:19.727-04:002011-10-15T22:18:19.727-04:00home is where the ones you love are I guess - whet...home is where the ones you love are I guess - whether on a lumpy bed in another country or in the security of your own bedroom. your true heart shines through here and thank you for your comment on my blog today. It meant a lot.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-21435807394043485602011-10-15T21:31:51.132-04:002011-10-15T21:31:51.132-04:00my goodness! this poems is so beautiful!! I love ...my goodness! this poems is so beautiful!! I love it! Very sexy too! :)voidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16651972747339353711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6892001069804213262011-10-15T21:31:29.739-04:002011-10-15T21:31:29.739-04:00You led us on a sensuous journey initially Heaven!...You led us on a sensuous journey initially Heaven! But it is actually a serious lament in the end. We then realize how lucky we are compared to others.<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43278117822762215572011-10-15T21:09:50.327-04:002011-10-15T21:09:50.327-04:00Think I need to go have a cold shower now, geez yo...Think I need to go have a cold shower now, geez you pulled out all the stops this time, not that you have ever a problem going taboo..hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-65344280300716377992011-10-15T20:26:32.903-04:002011-10-15T20:26:32.903-04:00A sensual treat... I love how the streets change a...A sensual treat... I love how the streets change after going home.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com