tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post7947583450994452566..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: darkly, yoursScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-90828848058474328942018-11-26T06:07:43.756-05:002018-11-26T06:07:43.756-05:00You do sensual with incomparable beauty!You do sensual with incomparable beauty!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14104845033819866072018-11-25T13:25:28.493-05:002018-11-25T13:25:28.493-05:00wow!!!wow!!!ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14120300412765974842018-11-22T08:40:25.528-05:002018-11-22T08:40:25.528-05:00love me
with all the certainty you can muster - lo...love me<br />with all the certainty you can muster - love this line so very much<br />oh Grace this is another side of you that is so beautifully expressed.<br />I am sky...oh this says so much without even trying. I am a mess of feelings now!Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11492243429734804802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24470654885140046242018-11-21T14:06:13.523-05:002018-11-21T14:06:13.523-05:00"the flint of our skin"...honey, spice, ..."the flint of our skin"...honey, spice, pepper, strawberry, chocolate, salt...a feast of a poem...well done..JimJIm Feeneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754509821434474479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62983283418833111532018-11-21T13:48:46.249-05:002018-11-21T13:48:46.249-05:00Gorgeous!! Oh to be the salt of someone's poet...Gorgeous!! Oh to be the salt of someone's poetry...Christine Irvinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17618710064770470221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-16710635274763026982018-11-21T11:59:50.742-05:002018-11-21T11:59:50.742-05:00Scarlet woman! such exquisite imagery and imaginat...Scarlet woman! such exquisite imagery and imagination <br />"twines with peppered kick<br />we melt"Laura Bloomsburyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00904500767566869311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71793690693561231602018-11-21T07:27:15.836-05:002018-11-21T07:27:15.836-05:00Fabulous, the undercurrent is strong *grin*Fabulous, the undercurrent is strong *grin*Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-85245600284504616482018-11-21T01:49:31.539-05:002018-11-21T01:49:31.539-05:00Fabulous writing, Grace/Scarlet! I could rave abo...Fabulous writing, Grace/Scarlet! I could rave about every line but there’s isn’t enough time this morning. :) The lines I’d pick out as exceptional are connected to taste:<br />‘remembering the drip of golden honey<br />from mouth of your song’<br />and<br />‘you are the salt of my poetry’.<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-81923847382970965492018-11-20T20:53:55.511-05:002018-11-20T20:53:55.511-05:00Wow, Grace...I mean, Scarlet...well done.Wow, Grace...I mean, Scarlet...well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13134589375016804713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-47880508593500974722018-11-20T20:19:42.867-05:002018-11-20T20:19:42.867-05:00Ooh, the sensual kick and energy in it is bristlin...Ooh, the sensual kick and energy in it is bristling, wholesome and beautiful — there is a deep bond and connection as we wade through the delicate ripple of this imagery which makes it even more satisfying.<br /><br />I loved this bit: "sweet, with heat, twines with peppered kick/we melt: sea of flames // the sight of strawberry moon, rising/to straddle your hips". And the sweet, sweet ending too.Anmol (HA)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02427056865589377093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40238231748274186022018-11-20T19:58:33.359-05:002018-11-20T19:58:33.359-05:00Oh man Grace, this is lush, rich, in its feel, sou...Oh man Grace, this is lush, rich, in its feel, sound, taste, and fragrance. What a sensual tour de force. I need to see where my wife... ;-). Beautiful work!robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34184828330739608862018-11-20T18:45:11.006-05:002018-11-20T18:45:11.006-05:00Such contentment waves sure are fine by weSuch contentment waves sure are fine by wePat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72519157672524675112018-11-20T17:58:57.804-05:002018-11-20T17:58:57.804-05:00Woww!💞 This is heavily sensuous and alluring, Gra...Woww!💞 This is heavily sensuous and alluring, Grace. Especially love; "night air bristles, the way spice darkens chocolates to red."💞Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-48396270962027663882018-11-20T17:03:56.703-05:002018-11-20T17:03:56.703-05:00The perfect blend of poetic sensuality and fetchin...The perfect blend of poetic sensuality and fetching form; couplets work well as stated. This one does over reach the mere romantic, and dangles its toes in the erotic; nicely penned. I like the line /raking memories stolen with hard kisses/.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6596221871045290492018-11-20T15:53:26.506-05:002018-11-20T15:53:26.506-05:00Stunning Grace!Stunning Grace!Linda Lee Lyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669367010600000396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88302020487956048772018-11-20T15:51:04.369-05:002018-11-20T15:51:04.369-05:00Better than the muse is the salt of poetry.Better than the muse is the salt of poetry.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19610163438603124842018-11-20T15:43:36.864-05:002018-11-20T15:43:36.864-05:00Oh my. There it is. That's the good stuff.
A...Oh my. There it is. That's the good stuff. <br /><br />Anybody else need a cigarette? (I don't even smoke!)The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19980135860486611642018-11-20T15:39:04.093-05:002018-11-20T15:39:04.093-05:00Love the use of only couplets for the couplingLove the use of only couplets for the couplingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12087602960167985957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-56751773124986964882018-11-20T15:18:02.853-05:002018-11-20T15:18:02.853-05:00This is wonderful.. love how you write from this b...This is wonderful.. love how you write from this blog... I had forgotten how hot you could write. This tastes a lot like Neruda...brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-37796531078559680792018-11-20T15:15:25.589-05:002018-11-20T15:15:25.589-05:00Love that final line.Love that final line.Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10901423562009365402018-11-20T15:07:08.925-05:002018-11-20T15:07:08.925-05:00Grace, this is so magnificent and beautiful.Grace, this is so magnificent and beautiful.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.com