tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post7835558537076769385..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: by the seaScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger52125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58327933705219387582013-04-25T06:47:31.067-04:002013-04-25T06:47:31.067-04:00Hi Grace and thanks for the challenge. I love the...Hi Grace and thanks for the challenge. I love the arrow image in the first and can feel the waves in the second. The words in the second lune push in and out. It's perfect.Carol Steel https://www.blogger.com/profile/01331628292567383426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52847708176910612592013-04-23T08:05:21.019-04:002013-04-23T08:05:21.019-04:00nice....i like the first one in particular...some ...nice....i like the first one in particular...some very tangible movement and energy in it...<br /><br />hiya.<br /><br />smilesBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-50266929007270899512013-04-23T00:59:57.829-04:002013-04-23T00:59:57.829-04:00Smell the freshness of spring here!Smell the freshness of spring here!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89580048885769549972013-04-22T23:48:55.846-04:002013-04-22T23:48:55.846-04:00Lovely write Heaven.... Lovely write Heaven.... Poetic Estrushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04642292550211573511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6040822558916137802013-04-22T21:31:25.795-04:002013-04-22T21:31:25.795-04:00I like the linking of the past disappearing with t...I like the linking of the past disappearing with the tide. Lovely imagery. Hope you're good, Grace.Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-48047155724406657972013-04-22T19:11:51.952-04:002013-04-22T19:11:51.952-04:00I like short pieces that say a lot and this is per...I like short pieces that say a lot and this is perfecto, nice work.rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-38446557096139785182013-04-22T13:14:26.866-04:002013-04-22T13:14:26.866-04:00Very nice piece!Very nice piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30668088135647348332013-04-22T12:18:38.121-04:002013-04-22T12:18:38.121-04:00Leave behind the unhappy past and wish you a good ...Leave behind the unhappy past and wish you a good week ahead.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-85998604953724719772013-04-22T08:36:22.566-04:002013-04-22T08:36:22.566-04:00Beautiful, Grace! My favorite place in all the la...Beautiful, Grace! My favorite place in all the land.Elsie Amatahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14531633490964827363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91171783828823795392013-04-22T04:52:21.880-04:002013-04-22T04:52:21.880-04:00It is an intersting form, well handled. I struggl...It is an intersting form, well handled. I struggle with it.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28397041501048110412013-04-22T02:57:33.966-04:002013-04-22T02:57:33.966-04:00What lovely verse.
Madeleine Begun KaneWhat lovely verse.<br /><br /><a href="http://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/" rel="nofollow">Madeleine Begun Kane</a>Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-77311840344875779692013-04-21T22:25:38.250-04:002013-04-21T22:25:38.250-04:00The notion of the past washing out on ocean waves ...The notion of the past washing out on ocean waves ... I love it!!! GREAT challenge.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10741469027604723392013-04-21T20:44:50.963-04:002013-04-21T20:44:50.963-04:00I love short forms like these and you have done th...I love short forms like these and you have done them very well without even making a series of them! Neat photo as well. And thank you for visiting my blog so faithfully. I always appreciate your comments.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72997595410331988702013-04-21T19:53:31.549-04:002013-04-21T19:53:31.549-04:00Grace, first off, thank you for a lovely, "He...Grace, first off, thank you for a lovely, "Heavenly" prompt! Lunes are one of the few forms I do well at all, and the Kelly is my favorite.<br /><br />You employed the lune to its best advantage. And yes, allowing the past to be past, the way you formed that final sentence, made it FINAL. Amen, you know? Really good writing here. AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-23528808814929432292013-04-21T17:55:56.955-04:002013-04-21T17:55:56.955-04:00Lovely Grace!
I love the broken arrows :D
I know ...Lovely Grace! <br />I love the broken arrows :D<br />I know when a Sand dollar breaks there are doves inside~<br />Your words remind me of this~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4534490939003226252013-04-21T16:10:22.683-04:002013-04-21T16:10:22.683-04:00Really beautiful! Opens to the reception of presen...Really beautiful! Opens to the reception of present love.Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-68246784460721071372013-04-21T15:20:10.964-04:002013-04-21T15:20:10.964-04:00Like broken arrow... unique and effective imagery....Like broken arrow... unique and effective imagery. Nice write!Charleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07983825702353264957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61924902798753917912013-04-21T14:30:39.687-04:002013-04-21T14:30:39.687-04:00I am glad you liked the words and form ~ Thank yo...I am glad you liked the words and form ~ Thank you ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26932509707555195792013-04-21T14:30:19.152-04:002013-04-21T14:30:19.152-04:00Kay, your post was so entertaining and a delight t...Kay, your post was so entertaining and a delight to read ~ Thank you ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-3401240805810558592013-04-21T14:29:50.703-04:002013-04-21T14:29:50.703-04:00The form calls for it ~ Thank you ~ The form calls for it ~ Thank you ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-12163511934083822092013-04-21T14:29:29.381-04:002013-04-21T14:29:29.381-04:00Thank you for picking up the sounds Aprille ~ I a...Thank you for picking up the sounds Aprille ~ I appreciate the lovely comment ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74726680548296957982013-04-21T14:14:57.786-04:002013-04-21T14:14:57.786-04:00Grace,
Like a broken arrow..sadness within the li...Grace,<br /><br />Like a broken arrow..sadness within the lines. Well done allow the past..past..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-85582075727314459402013-04-21T14:01:47.969-04:002013-04-21T14:01:47.969-04:00I love the first poem in particular, because I am ...I love the first poem in particular, because I am homesick for the sea.<br />And I agree about putting the past in the past.<br />Well done, and thank you for the challenge. I had fun playing around with it, entertained myself all morning!<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88852425128582218422013-04-21T13:47:31.513-04:002013-04-21T13:47:31.513-04:00tight writing! Love the broken arrow reference!
tight writing! Love the broken arrow reference!<br />Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71329168318666364082013-04-21T13:37:55.438-04:002013-04-21T13:37:55.438-04:00Like the way you go from the sound -sh- in ricoche...Like the way you go from the sound <b>-sh-</b> in rico<b>ch</b>et and <b>sh</b>ell and cra<b>sh</b>ing into the <b>-r-</b> in <b>r</b>ocks, b<b>r</b>oken and a<b>rr</b>ow, all perfectly positioned.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.com