tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post7469750901021014593..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: At the Italian CafeScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger72125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-86680302461690397102012-12-18T17:43:22.684-05:002012-12-18T17:43:22.684-05:00I am hungry now. Lovely descriptions! You have aw...I am hungry now. Lovely descriptions! You have awakened all my tastebuds and senses.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91523905388445321022012-12-15T07:41:29.756-05:002012-12-15T07:41:29.756-05:00Atmospheric to say the least - I love that 'br...Atmospheric to say the least - I love that 'bring it home with you' line. Yes! Luke Praterhttp://www.lukeprater.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-31325650696410549112012-12-14T14:38:17.795-05:002012-12-14T14:38:17.795-05:00beautiful imaginary...sense the tasting wordsbeautiful imaginary...sense the tasting wordsfranzahttp://franzad.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-55032871341325873662012-12-14T04:11:16.208-05:002012-12-14T04:11:16.208-05:00that's an evening to savourthat's an evening to savourLLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78578689766694566622012-12-13T18:34:51.154-05:002012-12-13T18:34:51.154-05:00my mouth is watering a bit. My taste buds linger ...my mouth is watering a bit. My taste buds linger on every word; already I'm not the same. Really beautiful imagery; you touched an array of senses.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33735971449669467062012-12-13T08:48:57.288-05:002012-12-13T08:48:57.288-05:00I'm certainly hungry for something, Grace...wh...I'm certainly hungry for something, Grace...what a great stew of sensuality. A complete picture on the page. Very nice work.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-5920477753107631542012-12-13T06:05:30.454-05:002012-12-13T06:05:30.454-05:00Ah, food and sex. Life's two greatest pleasure...Ah, food and sex. Life's two greatest pleasures and no mistake. This is evocative and brilliantly observed. The attention to small details is magical. Great write. Loved it!James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7140966827861070372012-12-13T05:22:30.687-05:002012-12-13T05:22:30.687-05:00such a nice array of the senses and thoughts, heel...such a nice array of the senses and thoughts, heels clicking on linoleum & indigo-inked skin!<br /><br />thanks so much for hosting, and for the poem ;-)adanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00710750989853277203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-85221326999926485622012-12-13T04:25:47.346-05:002012-12-13T04:25:47.346-05:00Such a good piece. I love the visuals here. And ...Such a good piece. I love the visuals here. And the variation between the stanzas is done so nicely.voices of people,<br />ubiquitous holiday carols,<br />grinding pepper mill,<br />crackling spice seeds,<br />clicking of cutlery,<br />heels on linoleum tile.<br />soak -- what an excellent stanza.<br /><br />Thanks.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-76535972069548386452012-12-13T00:50:59.825-05:002012-12-13T00:50:59.825-05:00How tasty and fun is your work!How tasty and fun is your work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42553838804795499182012-12-12T22:21:31.114-05:002012-12-12T22:21:31.114-05:00Oh Yum, very sensuous...indeed I will have to make...Oh Yum, very sensuous...indeed I will have to make a booking at my favourite Italian restaurant...mmmmm! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22460685701838985282012-12-12T20:10:05.441-05:002012-12-12T20:10:05.441-05:00Oh, I brought it home! This poem made me feel like...Oh, I brought it home! This poem made me feel like I was there! Wow Heaven, wow. ♥~♥ Bradley Howingtonhttp://www.bradleyhowington.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52078476327853883972012-12-12T18:47:36.951-05:002012-12-12T18:47:36.951-05:00Lovely sensuous poem. Lovely sensuous poem. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72304823347891873072012-12-12T16:02:13.993-05:002012-12-12T16:02:13.993-05:00food, romance, passion...you bring it all alive!.....food, romance, passion...you bring it all alive!....this isn't just words- it is tastes, smells,textures, emotions....you're the master at this for sureAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43745745850945704722012-12-12T15:39:43.678-05:002012-12-12T15:39:43.678-05:00Wow, Heaven. There is so much taste, sound and tex...Wow, Heaven. There is so much taste, sound and texture to this little eavesdropping, eye-popping piece. And your use of the words is seamless. Just beautiful. <br /><br />de <br />whimsygizmo.wordpress.comDe Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-68760849095403127402012-12-12T12:34:00.794-05:002012-12-12T12:34:00.794-05:00Since I live in Italy for the past three years, I ...Since I live in Italy for the past three years, I can attest to the exotic power of Italian food. It's to be savored. And can lead to all sorts of delights.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42349704326069490412012-12-12T11:15:50.717-05:002012-12-12T11:15:50.717-05:00This is delicious in every way. Your descriptions ...This is delicious in every way. Your descriptions make the poem an immersive experience :) Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10752324881352447292012-12-12T10:54:58.385-05:002012-12-12T10:54:58.385-05:00This is great!You certainly know how to make food ...This is great!You certainly know how to make food sing ;)Susan Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13241514922366571247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-92128097985163198112012-12-12T09:34:47.973-05:002012-12-12T09:34:47.973-05:00There's nothing like waking up with pleasant s...There's nothing like waking up with pleasant smells of yesterday. Great work!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26649576976159662012-12-12T08:49:24.012-05:002012-12-12T08:49:24.012-05:00This made me laugh...sounds like a food orgy in be...This made me laugh...sounds like a food orgy in bed with sweaty bums..hilarious. Nice imagery.Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-11303992899105404482012-12-12T06:12:05.674-05:002012-12-12T06:12:05.674-05:00Very atmospheric - smells, taste, the wonderful de...Very atmospheric - smells, taste, the wonderful descriptors you choose to paint a picture in our minds, Great job, GraceLuke Praterhttp://www.lukeprater.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13624622300899413852012-12-12T05:59:47.361-05:002012-12-12T05:59:47.361-05:00wow, nice. Unabashedly staining the sheets with t...wow, nice. Unabashedly staining the sheets with the day's dirty pleasures -- great advice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28792022906175675542012-12-12T00:57:25.962-05:002012-12-12T00:57:25.962-05:00NUMBER 36
Of senses four
the smell is by
the daug...NUMBER 36<br /><br />Of senses four<br />the smell is by<br />the daughter, or<br />sound sense goodby!Vacciniushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03631121664181976045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61065802118849571582012-12-12T00:47:55.084-05:002012-12-12T00:47:55.084-05:00You have addressed all the senses..eating certainl...You have addressed all the senses..eating certainly sounds sexy as you write it.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-35269234379440734582012-12-12T00:11:24.093-05:002012-12-12T00:11:24.093-05:00Like the scents and tastes in this on both levels ...Like the scents and tastes in this on both levels of appetite...beautiful.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.com