tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post7134311151082310197..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: ConvergenceScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71556445229464735732012-07-12T12:28:47.441-04:002012-07-12T12:28:47.441-04:00Oh, I really like storm sprayed canvas. Very nice!...Oh, I really like storm sprayed canvas. Very nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-66245698507036701572012-07-09T07:14:33.838-04:002012-07-09T07:14:33.838-04:00omg. i felt this piece.
i know this person.
and d...omg. i felt this piece.<br />i know this person.<br />and described so perfectly.<br /><br />wonderful write heaven.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33795612199276085112012-07-08T22:43:14.362-04:002012-07-08T22:43:14.362-04:00Wow, you're quite a painter yourself! Nice ge...Wow, you're quite a painter yourself! Nice gem :) Loved it from title to end.Benjamin Thomashttp://poetryshack.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-65186493617148866922012-07-07T12:46:18.285-04:002012-07-07T12:46:18.285-04:00"she had long lost him to the devil's cup..."she had long lost him to the devil's cup and arms of other women, <br />a poor replacement for his muse, who also left him in despair and grief " This is a scenario I am familiar with. Leaving a poet/writer to rise from the ashes..<br /><br />"free spirit" which is what we give our muses. free spirit and immortality in verse.<br /><br />Good Write :)daydreamerhttp://daydreamer.authorsxpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-56281767587334242432012-07-07T04:37:05.917-04:002012-07-07T04:37:05.917-04:00yes sad, evocative, expressive.yes sad, evocative, expressive.lucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8731099198868502922012-07-06T19:34:30.240-04:002012-07-06T19:34:30.240-04:00This is a beautiful tribute, Heaven. So well writt...This is a beautiful tribute, Heaven. So well written.De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-25307622015410514332012-07-06T15:33:59.793-04:002012-07-06T15:33:59.793-04:00His story is so sad but you captured it beautifull...His story is so sad but you captured it beautifully. Thank you, Heaven.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-54424874628960097472012-07-06T12:27:38.625-04:002012-07-06T12:27:38.625-04:00Wonderful...I used autumn leaves in my, too~
Love...Wonderful...I used autumn leaves in my, too~<br /><br />Love all the dripping in yours...paints the madness well!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4845045019045197882012-07-06T11:38:50.990-04:002012-07-06T11:38:50.990-04:00I really like what you've done here. You have...I really like what you've done here. You have a great talent for weaving words. So nice.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39601145887209568772012-07-06T10:56:03.660-04:002012-07-06T10:56:03.660-04:00You got the feel of paint dripping, layered words ...You got the feel of paint dripping, layered words dripping instead--very abstract and an excellent take on the prompt,Heaven.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67838625884469745582012-07-06T09:38:09.174-04:002012-07-06T09:38:09.174-04:00this is fantastic writing...quite an inspiration!this is fantastic writing...quite an inspiration!ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-54515090846677124602012-07-06T08:21:51.219-04:002012-07-06T08:21:51.219-04:00A little crazy isn't a bad thing, even a lot c...A little crazy isn't a bad thing, even a lot crazy in a certain cat's case haha, wonderfully created and captured moment.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10309034304700772692012-07-06T08:10:54.003-04:002012-07-06T08:10:54.003-04:00that was very inspired, sister!that was very inspired, sister!DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22600929135666498222012-07-06T07:47:13.227-04:002012-07-06T07:47:13.227-04:00I think you might have captured a wife's feeli...I think you might have captured a wife's feelings here. Though he was gone she still had his art, something to remember him by as he was, and something that will live forever (unlike the artist or herself).Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-50414787939884100322012-07-06T07:14:37.062-04:002012-07-06T07:14:37.062-04:00oh, the days of jumping on a whim long gone... som...oh, the days of jumping on a whim long gone... someone needs to be practical... smilesWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91622643257834904822012-07-06T06:32:43.750-04:002012-07-06T06:32:43.750-04:00What a wonderful interpretation of the artist. I b...What a wonderful interpretation of the artist. I bet he drove his wife crazy too. Yes, there is a little madness in each of us. His paintings would drive me nuts .. so chaotic. But I love your imagery :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82064708241759668502012-07-06T04:35:08.525-04:002012-07-06T04:35:08.525-04:00So impressed with this: you do in words what Jack ...So impressed with this: you do in words what Jack the Dripper does with colour. I bet he would have loved seeing this.aprillenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-29521790736937642982012-07-06T03:48:07.522-04:002012-07-06T03:48:07.522-04:00You captured the lack of discipline very well and ...You captured the lack of discipline very well and you clearly are in tune with Pollock's work.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-86163146593601550572012-07-06T01:26:45.517-04:002012-07-06T01:26:45.517-04:00Really nicely done Heaven. Nice build up here, gr...Really nicely done Heaven. Nice build up here, great ending, and I love the again and again stanza. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-41170424362651541222012-07-05T23:43:48.224-04:002012-07-05T23:43:48.224-04:00She also gave him an intellectual foundation for h...She also gave him an intellectual foundation for his work and the connections to become a success but I come with my own biases to your beautiful story. I have several of Lee Krasner's books. I love how you described the artwork, really wonderful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-56634538322219465082012-07-05T23:35:27.972-04:002012-07-05T23:35:27.972-04:00free spirit is a great gift in exchange for taking...free spirit is a great gift in exchange for taking the time to understand the others madness.. nicely painted graceClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28133467773440784522012-07-05T23:04:35.254-04:002012-07-05T23:04:35.254-04:00You always amaze me with your ability of the fulln...You always amaze me with your ability of the fullness of story in the form of your poetry. There're not really a lot of words here but you really manage to create an entire world with them! Well written!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22564880531400263022012-07-05T22:37:50.182-04:002012-07-05T22:37:50.182-04:00Thanks Laurie ~ The artist was an inspiration ~Thanks Laurie ~ The artist was an inspiration ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32401593073292368212012-07-05T22:37:27.426-04:002012-07-05T22:37:27.426-04:00That he was...I do like the ending question ~ His ...That he was...I do like the ending question ~ His doubts of his talent drove him deeper and deeper into drinking ~ Thanks for the visit Brian ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88402111488455974752012-07-05T22:30:18.582-04:002012-07-05T22:30:18.582-04:00Beautiful, Grace. You not only brought the picture...Beautiful, Grace. You not only brought the picture to life through your interpretation, but you also personalized it. Great ending, too!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com