tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post6806367935661400004..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Be stillScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28080877029973917492012-06-01T12:36:03.333-04:002012-06-01T12:36:03.333-04:00Thanks for the visit Stu ~ No worries, its fine :...Thanks for the visit Stu ~ No worries, its fine :-)Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-45024963132181186732012-06-01T11:19:48.372-04:002012-06-01T11:19:48.372-04:00damn my spelling as well- sorry :(damn my spelling as well- sorry :(Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74652889906541506842012-06-01T11:19:20.012-04:002012-06-01T11:19:20.012-04:00som sorry its taken me so long to get here! I coul...som sorry its taken me so long to get here! I couldn't jelp but see so muchj secual imagery in this! the baton raised before the orchestra (so that moment before sex?) and the plunging into the roaring sea....this was passionate- but also animalistic at the same time...so goodAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-66266671849203400242012-05-31T09:14:48.500-04:002012-05-31T09:14:48.500-04:00be still
let the moment stains your hand
as crush...be still <br />let the moment stains your hand<br />as crushed grapes slowly sip the oak barrel<br />spring's first blush, soft and tender<br /><br />Oh my... You had me at 'be still'<br /><br />Sensual and delicate, Heaven. I loved this.Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05106935982747804541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-47978506992843438082012-05-31T07:52:58.536-04:002012-05-31T07:52:58.536-04:00Love how the stanza's flow naturally into each...Love how the stanza's flow naturally into each other. Stillness intertwined with storm - excellent.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72565614441517378292012-05-30T22:49:12.193-04:002012-05-30T22:49:12.193-04:00Soft, delicate, and lovely!Soft, delicate, and lovely!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2711898272907146482012-05-30T20:54:54.018-04:002012-05-30T20:54:54.018-04:00Sigh...
Lovely work Heaven.Sigh...<br /><br />Lovely work Heaven.Joanne Young Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14431836725661024756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-57761307200854237502012-05-30T17:59:45.258-04:002012-05-30T17:59:45.258-04:00Be still, and notice how everything becomes more v...Be still, and notice how everything becomes more vivid, more interesting, more detailed. Peaceful and stormy images, all incredible. I like this poem, there's always need for a reminder to stop and just "be still." :)Ravenblackhttp://theotherdayplace.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80549377668620905432012-05-30T14:50:56.760-04:002012-05-30T14:50:56.760-04:00Sounds like a wonderful entry into stillness... I ...Sounds like a wonderful entry into stillness... I love the raised baton ... the anticipation... :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10094116226854880072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-56426131096645842012012-05-30T12:54:27.404-04:002012-05-30T12:54:27.404-04:00You've captured a moment in time with such per...You've captured a moment in time with such perfect imagery and expectation. I like the imperative: be still.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19883005458925138362012-05-30T12:27:12.500-04:002012-05-30T12:27:12.500-04:00Interesting imagery throughout..as though beauty a...Interesting imagery throughout..as though beauty and color in itself pleads for a caesura. Does the orchestra halt then? Very nice work.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-81817410645809097302012-05-30T04:56:40.738-04:002012-05-30T04:56:40.738-04:00Nice flow as we go along, Heaven! Peace and peace ...Nice flow as we go along, Heaven! Peace and peace of mind is elusive but to just carry on writing, that's it!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80525500760123598862012-05-30T01:31:14.248-04:002012-05-30T01:31:14.248-04:00"listening to the breathing of the white carn..."listening to the breathing of the white carnations" love this line, as I do the entire sensuality of the poem. Nice write!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-66028574869909234352012-05-30T00:30:16.289-04:002012-05-30T00:30:16.289-04:00ah nice...the being still before the pen breaks lo...ah nice...the being still before the pen breaks loose and verse pours forth..love those moments when the ink takes over..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-87837748001736125992012-05-29T22:16:26.932-04:002012-05-29T22:16:26.932-04:00"Be still" ... this relaxed me. Really, ..."Be still" ... this relaxed me. Really, it did.Alex Dissinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01469434538735231477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67513880047182262222012-05-29T22:07:22.830-04:002012-05-29T22:07:22.830-04:00Sei still, meine Liebe!*
You need so few words to...Sei still, meine Liebe!*<br /><br />You need so few words to construct hours...or years, of life, understanding, and love, and, ummmm, LUST!<br /><br />You ALWAYS do this, Sweet-Lust!<br />I'm not sure I remember your name...is it Grace?<br /><br />*Be still, my love!<br />PEACE!!!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82284686932676694162012-05-29T21:57:18.063-04:002012-05-29T21:57:18.063-04:00Hm. Never heard it called an orchestra before, but...Hm. Never heard it called an orchestra before, but this one certainly raises the baton before the roaring sea! (;0= }Charles Elliott/Beautyseerhttp://youtu.be/KAhXyRvpBcYnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-69264771716753600502012-05-29T21:46:18.647-04:002012-05-29T21:46:18.647-04:00Yes, thanks Tammy ~Yes, thanks Tammy ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-17409861709605468662012-05-29T21:32:04.666-04:002012-05-29T21:32:04.666-04:00Beautiful write, Grace.Beautiful write, Grace.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34943943677233707452012-05-29T21:30:58.622-04:002012-05-29T21:30:58.622-04:00breathing of white carnations -> nice personifi...breathing of white carnations -> nice personification<br /><br />one correction, i think you meant <strong>inkwell</strong> and not <strong>inkblot</strong>zongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-56111696525218854622012-05-29T21:17:53.905-04:002012-05-29T21:17:53.905-04:00Beautiful, sensual rhythm to this, like, well... n...Beautiful, sensual rhythm to this, like, well... nicely done!Frank Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11512960953837979822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-66647937090726553672012-05-29T21:02:48.900-04:002012-05-29T21:02:48.900-04:00A beautiful rhythm to this. Very nice!A beautiful rhythm to this. Very nice!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/05/29/dreaming-downhill/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8486292639068713562012-05-29T20:27:36.406-04:002012-05-29T20:27:36.406-04:00Thanks Fred ~ My mind went there too :-)Thanks Fred ~ My mind went there too :-)Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-11187892079200356682012-05-29T20:26:45.911-04:002012-05-29T20:26:45.911-04:00Lovely smell and beautiful ~ Thanks Dez ~Lovely smell and beautiful ~ Thanks Dez ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88497900350964483532012-05-29T20:26:17.796-04:002012-05-29T20:26:17.796-04:00Thanks Audrey for the lovely words ~Thanks Audrey for the lovely words ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com