tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post6505601015912385768..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: two moons agoScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-59254382031767852152016-11-05T10:52:18.445-04:002016-11-05T10:52:18.445-04:00The imagery is metaphorical, but the meaning is cl...The imagery is metaphorical, but the meaning is clear. Nicely done! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05126230685516232230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-64288199131045012782016-11-04T21:33:22.548-04:002016-11-04T21:33:22.548-04:00You have very vivid images, Grace. There are no c...You have very vivid images, Grace. There are no cold nights with these lines. :-)Imeldahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00477386880496665001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-5672599092245162462016-11-04T15:52:25.958-04:002016-11-04T15:52:25.958-04:00Black wolf's racing pulse .... delicious! Mmm....Black wolf's racing pulse .... delicious! Mmm. Hello Scarlet! ❤️Great structure and format. <br /><br />Mother Wintermoon <br /><br />(I had to use my old, inactive Blogger account in order to comment).<br /><br />Judith https://www.blogger.com/profile/10364406224705815358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26581545729425381072016-11-04T15:49:42.996-04:002016-11-04T15:49:42.996-04:00This time around, I'm picturing red, lipsticke...This time around, I'm picturing red, lipsticked lips wrapped around a black ... um, "Bic"? You know what I'm saying. :) The chocolate, the black wolf. I think they might be describing the man.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80477886921737858322016-11-04T08:39:11.838-04:002016-11-04T08:39:11.838-04:00Sensuously beautiful Grace. Makes one feel young!
...Sensuously beautiful Grace. Makes one feel young!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30009305520391636482016-11-04T03:16:31.035-04:002016-11-04T03:16:31.035-04:00Sensuous and spicy, Grace, and I love the title!Sensuous and spicy, Grace, and I love the title!Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-226425139913496782016-11-04T00:15:19.093-04:002016-11-04T00:15:19.093-04:00Senses combined in unexpected ways makes this so t...Senses combined in unexpected ways makes this so tantalizing. <br />Mishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16298805958255695264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62368837664166288222016-11-03T23:13:29.938-04:002016-11-03T23:13:29.938-04:00All your senses are alive and kicking! Love this....All your senses are alive and kicking! Love this.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91612632595087599692016-11-03T21:34:46.194-04:002016-11-03T21:34:46.194-04:00Sensual..like these lines especially: way spice d...Sensual..like these lines especially: way spice darkens<br /> chocolates to red<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-85193340318071059912016-11-03T19:24:24.193-04:002016-11-03T19:24:24.193-04:00Very sensual. Very sensual. Arcadia Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02632127814188649845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34573964631585918702016-11-03T16:47:52.412-04:002016-11-03T16:47:52.412-04:00Both are fantastic, but I especially like the open...Both are fantastic, but I especially like the opening lines of the second. I'm glad to see Scarlet make an appearance. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-65699340129450421302016-11-03T16:18:10.342-04:002016-11-03T16:18:10.342-04:00This just drips with sensuality - the way only cho...This just drips with sensuality - the way only chocolate can meltbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43060360784988332552016-11-03T16:11:14.525-04:002016-11-03T16:11:14.525-04:00I love the allusions to food and tasting in your p...I love the allusions to food and tasting in your poems, making such use of all the senses.Marina Sofiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15251903359649828285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79696428431119284722016-11-03T16:06:59.872-04:002016-11-03T16:06:59.872-04:00I liked the idea of something that "darkens c...I liked the idea of something that "darkens chocolate to red" and melting in flames.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83269437777443962072016-11-03T15:54:40.216-04:002016-11-03T15:54:40.216-04:00Really evocative verse, sparse, yet laden with sce...Really evocative verse, sparse, yet laden with scents on our taste buds. Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00317010351235597864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-5525234580292745772016-11-03T15:43:11.937-04:002016-11-03T15:43:11.937-04:00You give us a peek into sensuous moments that igni...You give us a peek into sensuous moments that ignite passion between two. I love how skilled you are at this, Grace. Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32952263472944154832016-11-03T15:18:50.743-04:002016-11-03T15:18:50.743-04:00Sensuality bursts from every line; wow. I wonder i...Sensuality bursts from every line; wow. I wonder if the black wolf (alpha male) is sweet on the sleek ginger bitch who runs at his side? The second poem resonates most with me, but both sizzle & please.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-21338652653079482342016-11-03T15:13:33.217-04:002016-11-03T15:13:33.217-04:00Such words will sure heat up the fall and make the...Such words will sure heat up the fall and make the summer even hotter.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com