tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post6155260197441427294..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: The sweet seasonScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67367376958441302472016-05-14T14:36:26.074-04:002016-05-14T14:36:26.074-04:00Fiery!!! :-) You do know how to write with the sen...Fiery!!! :-) You do know how to write with the senses. <br /><br />~ImeldaImeldahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18171383510208182346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2143890601956853852016-05-14T14:31:26.050-04:002016-05-14T14:31:26.050-04:00A very sexy write Grace! Hot and electrifying. Hug...A very sexy write Grace! Hot and electrifying. Hugs!Bekkie Sanchezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300001421561443693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67337832123648994642016-05-14T12:38:59.582-04:002016-05-14T12:38:59.582-04:00Oh my..this is so sensual and sweet. I would end u...Oh my..this is so sensual and sweet. I would end up quoting the whole piece to choose a favourite line. I love Pablo Neruda's work and you have woven it in so well that the Golden Shovel effect is seamless. Love this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-77610054711224274762016-05-13T22:02:28.479-04:002016-05-13T22:02:28.479-04:00Oh my, this is wickedly hot. I especially loved th...Oh my, this is wickedly hot. I especially loved the wordplay here:<br /><br />your kisses are lightning<br />while my lips are ink and<br /> pink pressing letters on your skin, we're two<br />voyagers finding the same spiral shell,<br /><br />Wow... it is warm in here... need a glass of water...The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-46026536548510348702016-05-13T20:05:04.231-04:002016-05-13T20:05:04.231-04:00Oh, yes! You've mastered the golden shovel -- ...Oh, yes! You've mastered the golden shovel -- gorgeous piece, very sensual!PSChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17262352611143658741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78994013701150009752016-05-13T15:54:49.066-04:002016-05-13T15:54:49.066-04:00Sounds like spring, sounds like a fever *grin*Sounds like spring, sounds like a fever *grin*Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-47408622685039207212016-05-13T15:20:27.423-04:002016-05-13T15:20:27.423-04:00Ah, the passion, the vibrancy, the shear fiercenes...Ah, the passion, the vibrancy, the shear fierceness of love. You captured this so well!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24606307178909918502016-05-13T11:20:42.679-04:002016-05-13T11:20:42.679-04:00Fearless!Fearless!Petru J Viljoenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04821468855056711841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9489932315738439462016-05-13T10:57:48.739-04:002016-05-13T10:57:48.739-04:00Quite a season one would never want to endQuite a season one would never want to endPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71846480145670594742016-05-13T08:43:11.980-04:002016-05-13T08:43:11.980-04:00...finding the same spiral shell... Oh this is won......finding the same spiral shell... Oh this is wonderful indeed. The passion is visceral! I believe I must fan myself!!<br />Just an excellent expansion of Neruda's line! lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6527323437150108772016-05-13T07:13:43.491-04:002016-05-13T07:13:43.491-04:00lovely!!lovely!!ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40691139947489897592016-05-13T01:52:36.254-04:002016-05-13T01:52:36.254-04:00Such an achievement - form, words, emotions - ever...Such an achievement - form, words, emotions - everything.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32872528285759678002016-05-12T22:06:42.192-04:002016-05-12T22:06:42.192-04:00HEAVENS.
This is fantastic.
First off, the line ...HEAVENS. <br />This is fantastic. <br />First off, the line you chose is breathtaking. Your use of it, divine. <br />Oh, THIS: <br />"while my lips are ink and<br /> pink pressing letters on your skin" <br /><br />And your use of spacing, parens, hyphens. Goodness. I am simply in love with this poem. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60718169092621796792016-05-12T21:01:49.875-04:002016-05-12T21:01:49.875-04:00If I wanted to read something that says spring thi...If I wanted to read something that says spring this would be it Grace, truly beautiful images you have created.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07512953735819338268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-66531764294866439732016-05-12T19:30:08.317-04:002016-05-12T19:30:08.317-04:00Grace, this is delicious. I love that I can feel t...Grace, this is delicious. I love that I can feel the Neruda, but the poem is still all yours. Such effective enjambment and dance of words. Love how the image coil and sway, in unison... showing us everything. ♥ Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26002876630153635542016-05-12T19:08:42.397-04:002016-05-12T19:08:42.397-04:00I really like this form I may have to try it somet...I really like this form I may have to try it sometimes. The poem flows effortlessly, you are a weaver of words.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-37780767557673548542016-05-12T17:58:52.047-04:002016-05-12T17:58:52.047-04:00My favorite lines by you:
your kisses are lightni...My favorite lines by you:<br /><br />your kisses are lightning<br />while my lips are ink and<br /> pink pressing letters on your skin, we're two<br />voyagers finding the same spiral shell,<br /><br />Superb! and creatively visual. You always capture my attention towards your writing. I love this so much. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61394159007294276822016-05-12T17:23:37.249-04:002016-05-12T17:23:37.249-04:00This phrase is splendid: "your kisses are lig...This phrase is splendid: "your kisses are lightning while my lips are ink" -- Really lovely poemMiskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60528208463313905882016-05-12T16:21:42.842-04:002016-05-12T16:21:42.842-04:00Passionate without being too fulsome. I like the ...Passionate without being too fulsome. I like the way your lines have expanded on the quote from Neruda and given them a new life.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-55196200728196655402016-05-12T16:18:23.349-04:002016-05-12T16:18:23.349-04:00Simply lovely. This is such a fun form and you'...Simply lovely. This is such a fun form and you've done a great job with it here.AnotherFearlessYear.nethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11189052349065089513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-49391081562656334642016-05-12T16:02:12.059-04:002016-05-12T16:02:12.059-04:00I love the inking lips of pink "pressing lett...I love the inking lips of pink "pressing letters on your skin"...a passionate Golden Shovel, Grace.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10601255041014483162016-05-12T16:00:41.855-04:002016-05-12T16:00:41.855-04:00I'll echo what Glenn said, as you have us, tra...I'll echo what Glenn said, as you have us, transverse salts, in an afterwards, lingering in the strewn fine sugared spill of your poem ... :)Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30987246961356560632016-05-12T15:16:49.847-04:002016-05-12T15:16:49.847-04:00Such sweet and sensuous array of emotions flow fro...Such sweet and sensuous array of emotions flow from this poem :D<br />Beautifully penned.<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-16480653331723952582016-05-12T15:14:04.694-04:002016-05-12T15:14:04.694-04:00Sweet without being saccharine, this lusty piece i...Sweet without being saccharine, this lusty piece is terrific; not only a perfect Neruda golden shovel, but you felt frisky with the lines, letting them move around a bit, & the parentheses pop up as well; what fun. I love the lines /your kisses are lightning/while my lips are ink/--stunning imagery.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-55236725082609956312016-05-12T15:12:32.645-04:002016-05-12T15:12:32.645-04:00This felt like reading a Neruda Poem.. the voice i...This felt like reading a Neruda Poem.. the voice is perfect expansion of the chosen lines. I think this might be one of my favorite of yours in a long time. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com