tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post5731344658062539546..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: What I want to do with youScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger55125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79318901231013419072012-03-11T21:53:38.283-04:002012-03-11T21:53:38.283-04:00Beautiful and sensual! I truly enjoyed :)Beautiful and sensual! I truly enjoyed :)Lavonne https://www.blogger.com/profile/08817933529480937250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-20576488090590602362012-03-11T16:22:18.418-04:002012-03-11T16:22:18.418-04:00Very sensual.Very sensual.booguloohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12608900652242111334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9186057528525724472012-03-09T20:48:44.372-05:002012-03-09T20:48:44.372-05:00I love this! I'm trying to figure out how to s...I love this! I'm trying to figure out how to share this with my wife without blowing my alter ego :-)Ethan Lamberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18005642810763475029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2057306420778647162012-03-08T15:04:34.402-05:002012-03-08T15:04:34.402-05:00Heaven -- you gotta put these all in a book, they&...Heaven -- you gotta put these all in a book, they're SUCH GREAT POEMS!! I really mean it, your stuff should be published in a tome I can sit with in a big cozy chair. Or on a picnic blanket under a cherry blooming wonderment tree!<br /><br />I like the part about the water on paper. I think fine parchment by candle light. And maybe some whiskey beside the water. :)<br /><br />xoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-233288688113827932012-03-08T14:18:14.953-05:002012-03-08T14:18:14.953-05:00Spring brings everything to life, doesn't it? ...Spring brings everything to life, doesn't it? This is my favorite line: "the sun nudges my limbs apart"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83030288291932973592012-03-08T09:22:09.191-05:002012-03-08T09:22:09.191-05:00For anyone wanting to feel love and passion, espec...For anyone wanting to feel love and passion, especially in those first knowing moments- this is it. Just beautifully written- so sensual- and I think that the references to nature make it so earthy- so linked to everything that surrounds us. Fantasticstu mcp (hate & hope)http://www.poemsofhateandhope.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52375287457492203572012-03-07T22:03:11.117-05:002012-03-07T22:03:11.117-05:00You had me after two lines
then you really drew me...You had me after two lines<br />then you really drew me in in the second verse,<br />the rest left me dripping in wow,<br />what I really like is that there's this sense<br />that *nothing* is happening except in a person's head<br />as this person looks on at another<br />dreaming of love;<br />of course, the images are palpable.<br /><br />Exceptionally beautiful poetry.Matt Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09276531398959895160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61244755993855470292012-03-07T20:04:57.883-05:002012-03-07T20:04:57.883-05:00Lonely treeLonely treeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43857116990055941622012-03-07T19:37:30.347-05:002012-03-07T19:37:30.347-05:00the second half gushed. here's my favorite nug...the second half gushed. here's my favorite nuggets: i want to sink into your folds... the sun nudges my limbs apart... i want to embrace the scent of your solitary soul... moths and birds flee with our cries. <br />reading this was like stepping on pretty rocks across a spring river.Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74472428348641671292012-03-07T18:35:58.191-05:002012-03-07T18:35:58.191-05:00How beautifully you expanded that spring/cherry tr...How beautifully you expanded that spring/cherry tree relationship. Yum yum all the way down. Thank you for your visit and kind words on my recent post. I'll be back.Yousei Himehttp://tasmith1122.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60538565968513039292012-03-07T15:12:02.321-05:002012-03-07T15:12:02.321-05:00i want to sink into your folds
like water on parch...i want to sink into your folds<br />like water on parched paper<br /><br />I'm sure Caddoc could take any amount of that...Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72720716068632296842012-03-07T14:14:02.472-05:002012-03-07T14:14:02.472-05:00beautiful and vivid imagery Heaven. really enjoye...beautiful and vivid imagery Heaven. really enjoyed this. <br /><br />my favorite lines-- <br /><br />the sun nudges my limbs apart,<br />i want to embrace the scent <br />of your solitary soul, thrust of passion<br />in the changing shadow and light<br /><br /><br />easy to identify with these well-penned lines. nicely done. -- C.Christi Moonhttp://www.lettersothemoon.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13936921437174267582012-03-07T14:12:02.810-05:002012-03-07T14:12:02.810-05:00Beautiful! Pablo Neruda's work inspired me to...Beautiful! Pablo Neruda's work inspired me to write poetry. Here's my story: http://bareyournakedtruth.wordpress.com/about-nicole-luongo/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-86098267772797902692012-03-07T11:31:27.775-05:002012-03-07T11:31:27.775-05:00Gently erotic with the power to tenderly entrap. B...Gently erotic with the power to tenderly entrap. Beautiful work!James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74105341362806948322012-03-07T11:08:15.149-05:002012-03-07T11:08:15.149-05:00Ah, Heaven, your sensual verse jumpstarts Spring f...Ah, Heaven, your sensual verse jumpstarts Spring for me. Even in January. :) xoJoseph Heschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4378311400595829862012-03-07T06:51:06.795-05:002012-03-07T06:51:06.795-05:00The lines have such a natural, inevitable flow...s...The lines have such a natural, inevitable flow...sensual and compelling. This poem leaves the reader wanting more of it. Every stanza has an excellent phrase or picture ("I want to sink into your folds like water on parched paper") Very nice work.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-53254043235414889092012-03-07T02:45:02.136-05:002012-03-07T02:45:02.136-05:00i agree ~ spring fever is heating up your poetry, ...i agree ~ spring fever is heating up your poetry, Heaven!<br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-59349814815431088412012-03-07T02:17:42.098-05:002012-03-07T02:17:42.098-05:00some incredible imagery here. winterdrops, honeyc...some incredible imagery here. winterdrops, honeycomb in your lips, tinged with red plums and berries, like water on parched paper- love that line, as you get the additional proximity parched has with parchment- very nice.moths and birds flee with our cries, <br />leaves quiver to the bee stings really great lines from start to end, fun read. I enjoyed the piece a lot Thanks,Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19401420114732288132012-03-07T00:01:22.431-05:002012-03-07T00:01:22.431-05:00Well, most of what I wanted to say, has already be...Well, most of what I wanted to say, has already been said by others here. Wonderful. I wish one day I can evoke the same images and emotions with my words :).Arjan Tupanhttp://apoemeachday.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34444331105313436502012-03-06T23:36:50.302-05:002012-03-06T23:36:50.302-05:00My goodness, you do capture the passion and sensua...My goodness, you do capture the passion and sensuality of the Neruda line. You have so many lovely lines that I hate to just quote one. This combination of the universal happiness with the concrete honeycomb is very compelling:<br /><br />and my happiness craves the <br />honeycomb in your lipsAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-48764566756350086282012-03-06T21:47:00.423-05:002012-03-06T21:47:00.423-05:00My favorite line is: moths and birds flee with our...My favorite line is: moths and birds flee with our cries, <br />leaves quiver to the bee stings<br /><br />The hottest thing I ever said to my husband was: Anyone can do me. I can do myself. The question is, can you undo me.colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-75395269677691143272012-03-06T19:03:07.876-05:002012-03-06T19:03:07.876-05:00I love this, gorgeous!I love this, gorgeous!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79096483218026045542012-03-06T18:37:48.175-05:002012-03-06T18:37:48.175-05:00What a lovely poem!What a lovely poem!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8918689711765564802012-03-06T18:24:22.671-05:002012-03-06T18:24:22.671-05:00I always wanted to be a cherry tree. This is a fan...I always wanted to be a cherry tree. This is a fantastic piece that should stir all readers to passion.<br /><br />Cheers,<br /><br />Mark ButkusMark Butkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04028422696260495656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-84227325680527234402012-03-06T17:55:20.464-05:002012-03-06T17:55:20.464-05:00Beautiful--and filled with a subtle eroticism that...Beautiful--and filled with a subtle eroticism that I love!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.com