tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post5637600628500803423..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Ripe as scarletScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger64125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7202931010707671762015-12-03T19:19:46.164-05:002015-12-03T19:19:46.164-05:00How gorgeous ... as always. :)How gorgeous ... as always. :)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-87540011011473877942014-06-12T21:09:57.928-04:002014-06-12T21:09:57.928-04:00This is so precious....so lovely! OlianaThis is so precious....so lovely! OlianaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-20425847290307870982013-06-03T17:54:29.197-04:002013-06-03T17:54:29.197-04:00"don't let me forget / this moment -"..."don't let me forget / this moment -": I love the ending. Your poem flows so well, with all these unexpected compound words at the edges... Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-29477701614208864272013-06-03T06:19:33.790-04:002013-06-03T06:19:33.790-04:00the tides peel our skin
moist as tende...the tides peel our skin <br /> moist as tenderness-<br />Grace,<br />You've become a number one poetess... I am just amazed at how you pick those pieces of time material and create such beauty. <br />delicious work<br />THANKSDulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-51798661676489347782013-06-03T01:44:09.541-04:002013-06-03T01:44:09.541-04:00This drenches the senses with a flood of wonderful...This drenches the senses with a flood of wonderful imagery Grace.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88630562246609081402013-06-01T11:18:54.508-04:002013-06-01T11:18:54.508-04:00This is amazing on every level. I hope you have a ...This is amazing on every level. I hope you have a great weekend Grace! Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74336230241651097402013-05-31T21:06:45.265-04:002013-05-31T21:06:45.265-04:00Hey grace-- this is very sensual but also very lig...Hey grace-- this is very sensual but also very light and fun. The mixing up o the senses is quite playful. I especially liked the lines re cadence and slow kisses and ivory keys. This is Karin by the way of Manicddaily. Google I going to make me use an old google account. K. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58177660516653689592013-05-31T19:59:19.358-04:002013-05-31T19:59:19.358-04:00Oh Grace - this is just fabulous!Oh Grace - this is just fabulous!Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-27262536388231381572013-05-31T17:56:55.671-04:002013-05-31T17:56:55.671-04:00"undercurrents
ripe as scarlet verses,&quo..."undercurrents <br /> <br />ripe as scarlet verses,"<br /><br />many possible interpretations of those four words. Beautiful piece, Grace. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-48268725617441137202013-05-31T13:04:15.823-04:002013-05-31T13:04:15.823-04:00Love it!! Okay the very beginning with ivory as si...Love it!! Okay the very beginning with ivory as silent and morning a faded watercolor, that is so precious. Beginnings are so precious! And remembering the moment is a fantastic ending as that is what we are left with. Incredible, I picked a good day to check back on the d-verse poets pub. Thanks.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13812779163358293502013-05-31T10:20:24.355-04:002013-05-31T10:20:24.355-04:00Love what you did Heaven. A very sensual piece... ...Love what you did Heaven. A very sensual piece... Learned something new today.. :)<br /><br />peace and love<br />1ManView1ManViewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17896979433381268598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61613232837352580362013-05-31T10:02:41.980-04:002013-05-31T10:02:41.980-04:00Grace, a sensual beauty - love the quiet cadence o...Grace, a sensual beauty - love the quiet cadence of your words- just lovely. KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-55195411377857754562013-05-31T09:53:44.205-04:002013-05-31T09:53:44.205-04:00The sensualness of this goes well with the prompt....The sensualness of this goes well with the prompt. And can we ever tire of trying to explain this experience of love?Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26372058872171372392013-05-31T09:00:25.040-04:002013-05-31T09:00:25.040-04:00I adored this one! I have tasted color, my dear!!...I adored this one! I have tasted color, my dear!! Have a beautiful weekend =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4544853376217316592013-05-31T06:27:56.887-04:002013-05-31T06:27:56.887-04:00Sensual and exciting. Lovely work.Sensual and exciting. Lovely work.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39401917828050016452013-05-31T04:58:55.639-04:002013-05-31T04:58:55.639-04:00A very tender description right from the title of ...A very tender description right from the title of the poem!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-25076110863703724542013-05-31T03:16:11.886-04:002013-05-31T03:16:11.886-04:00Simply delicious!Simply delicious!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-84115372899859103472013-05-31T02:50:44.768-04:002013-05-31T02:50:44.768-04:00...Grace, your end is a winner... i think i can ne......Grace, your end is a winner... i think i can never write an intimate poem as beautiful as yours... it is your genre... your comfort zone... and i adore you for that ability... this is my fave part:<br /><br />slide your hands beneath me , <br />liquid is sky, everything is a seed- <br /><br />this is how we make <br />our memory<br /><br />in river’s aria,<br />jettisoning into the wild cosmos, the rush <br /><br />cradling us - <br />a birthing, or a dying of familiar things - <br /><br />but oh, don't let me forget<br />this moment..<br /><br />...smiles... kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-18258730194428800602013-05-31T02:40:25.112-04:002013-05-31T02:40:25.112-04:00i loved 'no word is colorless' and 'ri...i loved 'no word is colorless' and 'ripe as scarlet verses'<br />beautifulLady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-50548608181027125612013-05-31T00:53:00.285-04:002013-05-31T00:53:00.285-04:00so sensual...every word moves...loved it!so sensual...every word moves...loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-70571761971325328762013-05-31T00:30:30.842-04:002013-05-31T00:30:30.842-04:00"no word is colorless"
I love that!"no word is colorless"<br /><br />I love that! Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-11069805341387305602013-05-31T00:19:51.999-04:002013-05-31T00:19:51.999-04:00you would drain color from this world
and refill i...you would drain color from this world<br />and refill it with your wordsgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-68675206387484843072013-05-30T23:50:20.384-04:002013-05-30T23:50:20.384-04:00I can't choose a favorite line or verse or phr...I can't choose a favorite line or verse or phrase. This is absolutement stunning. Excellent write and beautiful, sensuous imagery. -MikeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7040336794807362992013-05-30T23:15:32.850-04:002013-05-30T23:15:32.850-04:00I love this:
"no word is colorless
...I love this:<br />"no word is colorless <br /> in your eyes"<br /><br />"kissing me slowly, like Sun-" ... great line break<br /><br />Gorgeous:<br />"slide your hands beneath me , <br /> liquid is sky"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32299801123746450892013-05-30T21:47:40.448-04:002013-05-30T21:47:40.448-04:00stunning and sensual. easy to get lose in this. ...stunning and sensual. easy to get lose in this. I also enjoyed the visual appearance of the staggered lines.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.com