tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post4975832071302466482..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Woman to ManScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58825157741489300792015-08-15T20:09:39.166-04:002015-08-15T20:09:39.166-04:00So earthy and amazing words, feelings so well expr...So earthy and amazing words, feelings so well expressed in your poem, Grace!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6048078660345331872015-08-15T10:48:03.153-04:002015-08-15T10:48:03.153-04:00"the grit our veins inhale
when our ribs twin..."the grit our veins inhale<br />when our ribs twine<br />petal & spine" <br />What passion, really beautiful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08356682434301279963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74335883068079719112015-08-15T10:41:10.393-04:002015-08-15T10:41:10.393-04:00"the grit our veins inhale
when our ribs twin..."the grit our veins inhale<br />when our ribs twine<br />petal & spine" <br />What passion, really beautiful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08356682434301279963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-17304589867817771902015-08-12T01:21:34.064-04:002015-08-12T01:21:34.064-04:00This is beautiful, sensual...This is beautiful, sensual...Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74903244406728637022015-08-11T13:40:32.228-04:002015-08-11T13:40:32.228-04:00beautiful G!beautiful G!ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4028500458507870152015-08-11T08:16:57.317-04:002015-08-11T08:16:57.317-04:00Oh that love could ever be that fierce - and fearl...Oh that love could ever be that fierce - and fearless. I like how you build it and build it through very passion-filled constructs as if to define it and maybe never quite. And the intimacy as you draw it to the close, running the tongue along the knife. That edge can be sharp. Very nice.<br /><br />FYI, shape, not shapes.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91833556649307218102015-08-10T21:08:16.436-04:002015-08-10T21:08:16.436-04:00This is magnificent...so many lines I love but esp...This is magnificent...so many lines I love but especially this, "a red blooming<br />that catches the sky's opal eyes" wow! Thank you for the inspiration!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44963388381927828322015-08-10T10:55:47.099-04:002015-08-10T10:55:47.099-04:00Oh so sensual, great poem. Oh so sensual, great poem. Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19301410585279427122015-08-10T07:19:10.130-04:002015-08-10T07:19:10.130-04:00This is simply gorgeous, Grace.This is simply gorgeous, Grace.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-1005532287899662692015-08-10T04:00:48.845-04:002015-08-10T04:00:48.845-04:00You can sure take an inspiration and use it well!You can sure take an inspiration and use it well!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19232662112549842492015-08-10T00:40:17.979-04:002015-08-10T00:40:17.979-04:00I really like that line about birthing tides. This...I really like that line about birthing tides. This really made me stop and think. And I love that the whole thing has an undertone of almost discontent about it. Matthew Henningsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05561605742904573649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-17382797690037698122015-08-09T21:34:03.239-04:002015-08-09T21:34:03.239-04:00What a glorious passionate poem. What a glorious passionate poem. Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82867229182852851962015-08-09T21:26:48.919-04:002015-08-09T21:26:48.919-04:00A super sensual poem, Grace, that also has a wonde...A super sensual poem, Grace, that also has a wonderful earthiness and natural ness to it--very well done. The close works so well too--all really well integrated. Thanks for the great challenge. k .Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39703668310286276852015-08-09T21:25:57.354-04:002015-08-09T21:25:57.354-04:00and to this end like a river that flows into the m...and to this end like a river that flows into the mouth of an ocean, this is how love grows<br /><br />gracias, 'Grace-fully' saidMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-46910275602421001122015-08-09T20:10:58.124-04:002015-08-09T20:10:58.124-04:00Lovely and sensual: the cadence beautifully echoi...Lovely and sensual: the cadence beautifully echoing the give and take; the close ... wonderfully romantic and yet, as real as a heartbeat. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-31158275263123212322015-08-09T18:56:29.543-04:002015-08-09T18:56:29.543-04:00Wow I am breathless reading these passionate words...Wow I am breathless reading these passionate words....truly a fabulous poem!<br /><br />Donna@LivingFromHappinessDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13420133886162844400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-5373783113976397032015-08-09T17:02:45.742-04:002015-08-09T17:02:45.742-04:00Beautiful on the Ms. Wright prompt. I wish now tha...Beautiful on the Ms. Wright prompt. I wish now that my mom or sis had given me the Birds and Bees talk. I might have changed my sex. For sure I would have ha a better understanding of my life mate earlier in life. Dad instead said that I already knew it all from watching the cows on our farm. <br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-27277358187765797832015-08-09T16:27:28.228-04:002015-08-09T16:27:28.228-04:00I am dreaming in anticipation :)I am dreaming in anticipation :)Mystichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02694933319719914988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39304258734258906562015-08-09T14:23:57.400-04:002015-08-09T14:23:57.400-04:00This is so full of passion...the valleys and groov...This is so full of passion...the valleys and grooves, the give and take, the fruits...the arching of your back....wowza :-)C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-41683547827517470312015-08-09T13:14:23.132-04:002015-08-09T13:14:23.132-04:00A very sensual poem..the very bones of passion. M...A very sensual poem..the very bones of passion. My fav part<br /><br />in the moonlight<br />This is our hunt & chase:<br />That we give & takeTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33952792332293624082015-08-09T13:06:50.895-04:002015-08-09T13:06:50.895-04:00Who better to write a poem entitled 'Woman to ...Who better to write a poem entitled 'Woman to Man' than you? You always take your reader deep beneath the surface of human relationships and remind us of the necessity of passion.<br /><br />I really enjoyed your featured poet's style.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-27489153630609944722015-08-09T12:45:56.517-04:002015-08-09T12:45:56.517-04:00Deep, sensual, real. Great.
Thanks for visiting....Deep, sensual, real. Great.<br /><br />Thanks for visiting.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42037336189632909602015-08-09T11:52:19.210-04:002015-08-09T11:52:19.210-04:00Wowzers! This one knocks my socks off. Especially ...Wowzers! This one knocks my socks off. Especially powerful is the tongue running along the quicksilver blade.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-25549891842581458442015-08-09T11:48:23.816-04:002015-08-09T11:48:23.816-04:00"The bones that shapes your thighs strong
The..."The bones that shapes your thighs strong<br />The fire that makes me arch my back"<br /><br />Beautiful. Sensual. Deep sharing... a delicious love dance. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80527165235301563332015-08-09T11:20:43.977-04:002015-08-09T11:20:43.977-04:00"every valley & groove
at rest, or rocki..."every valley & groove <br />at rest, or rocking to birthing tides"<br /><br />Beautiful, Grace.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com