tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post337490213006108596..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: AftermathScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger55125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72171483738143912522013-01-27T15:45:48.116-05:002013-01-27T15:45:48.116-05:00colorful. :)colorful. :)just a girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16826785377760697389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-87983547013570263642013-01-23T21:05:34.577-05:002013-01-23T21:05:34.577-05:00shattered shell... Perfect ending!shattered shell... Perfect ending!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-12063412622069475862013-01-23T18:48:05.584-05:002013-01-23T18:48:05.584-05:00LOVE your imagery!LOVE your imagery!Ben Dittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637997946476963455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-53927337275586812412013-01-23T13:12:21.324-05:002013-01-23T13:12:21.324-05:00this is waking up to find the phone still glued to...this is waking up to find the phone still glued to your ear; your lover, not on the other end. waiting like he/she should.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-27747899742716800372013-01-23T12:45:36.598-05:002013-01-23T12:45:36.598-05:00Heartbreaking.Heartbreaking.Elsie Amatahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14531633490964827363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4377352449761239312013-01-23T09:02:00.701-05:002013-01-23T09:02:00.701-05:00Well done. I like this form it is more flowing th...Well done. I like this form it is more flowing than the haiku.Tigerbritehttp://www.planetcyberluz.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-37515282531550344922013-01-23T08:58:30.426-05:002013-01-23T08:58:30.426-05:00This evokes strong emotions, Heaven, and strong im...This evokes strong emotions, Heaven, and strong imagery.<br /><br />Absolutely brilliant.<br /><br />Lady NyoAsobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7745869834278617732013-01-23T05:37:55.686-05:002013-01-23T05:37:55.686-05:00This is a great example of the three 'C's....This is a great example of the three 'C's.' Clear, concise and captivating. Very accomplished.James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-12450719550054916982013-01-23T04:15:40.233-05:002013-01-23T04:15:40.233-05:00love the lune, very effectively utilized here. Su...love the lune, very effectively utilized here. Such a fantastic use of imagery here, vivid to the senses. And the use of color and the tsunami drained of salt- highlights for me. Brilliantly creative write. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22773362834492101252013-01-23T00:47:01.547-05:002013-01-23T00:47:01.547-05:00Powerful imagry here, Grace. A beautiful write!Powerful imagry here, Grace. A beautiful write!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-15090723249442290972013-01-22T22:34:12.589-05:002013-01-22T22:34:12.589-05:00You really painted the scene with the night drowni...You really painted the scene with the night drowning the ash. The first stanza just flowed out beautifully, and I could feel the sadness of loss throughout. Nice to see you, too :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58406811993390581252013-01-22T22:16:36.528-05:002013-01-22T22:16:36.528-05:00Wow, I doubt I could have described "the leav...Wow, I doubt I could have described "the leaving" so perfectly, I think I write fairly well at times :) Very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your voice is always a pleasure. A sweat northern breeze no matter the topic.henry clemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2013/01/22/a-new-voice/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32673791014954615262013-01-22T21:54:59.616-05:002013-01-22T21:54:59.616-05:00beautiful, image-rich, so rich it almost breaks my...beautiful, image-rich, so rich it almost breaks my heartAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-1958912884793098472013-01-22T20:44:36.764-05:002013-01-22T20:44:36.764-05:00Rosie Hardy is so talented, a muse for your creati...Rosie Hardy is so talented, a muse for your creative talents ~<br /><br />Thanks so much for the lovely words dear ~ Much appreciated ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63331701946252545312013-01-22T20:43:48.015-05:002013-01-22T20:43:48.015-05:00Thank you Susie ~Thank you Susie ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22876337168062706322013-01-22T20:43:37.536-05:002013-01-22T20:43:37.536-05:00She is a terrific artist ~ Thanks Dani ~She is a terrific artist ~ Thanks Dani ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61129020742440883562013-01-22T20:42:44.252-05:002013-01-22T20:42:44.252-05:00Thanks so much for the lovely compliments and visi...Thanks so much for the lovely compliments and visit ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9886856717076276542013-01-22T19:09:43.469-05:002013-01-22T19:09:43.469-05:00Your first stanza blew me away. Absolutely beautif...Your first stanza blew me away. Absolutely beautiful sadness.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13646917707699645492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67883865761247390822013-01-22T19:01:24.128-05:002013-01-22T19:01:24.128-05:00so heartfelt, bittersweet, yes, fabulous imagery.....so heartfelt, bittersweet, yes, fabulous imagery... "i drifted, swallowed dry by sea" ... love thismrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91525360068981825762013-01-22T18:52:19.244-05:002013-01-22T18:52:19.244-05:00I most appreciate the oceanic references. Nice wor...I most appreciate the oceanic references. Nice work, Grace.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9040512820195821542013-01-22T18:29:50.231-05:002013-01-22T18:29:50.231-05:00Parting is always a hard thing to deal with, your ...Parting is always a hard thing to deal with, your words expressed the feeling.ScottlBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09147326078011352857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10692880603152716682013-01-22T18:08:40.269-05:002013-01-22T18:08:40.269-05:00This is beautiful. It leaves me with such a melan...This is beautiful. It leaves me with such a melancholy feel. I love the way you paint a picture with your words.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-49135132937218435582013-01-22T17:22:26.565-05:002013-01-22T17:22:26.565-05:00Lovely poem. Congrats on joining the team...Nice p...Lovely poem. Congrats on joining the team...Nice picture, you are beautiful!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-49327877562044578632013-01-22T17:02:44.692-05:002013-01-22T17:02:44.692-05:00Goodbye is always accompanied by a wave of emotion...Goodbye is always accompanied by a wave of emotions. Great imagery in this, Grace. Alex Dissinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01469434538735231477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-76498364758032720692013-01-22T17:01:13.725-05:002013-01-22T17:01:13.725-05:00A haunting ending here - the last verse resonates ...A haunting ending here - the last verse resonates for me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com