tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post305856559957911989..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: MuseScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger56125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14270262633638379152012-10-29T18:53:43.749-04:002012-10-29T18:53:43.749-04:00"I became drunk with every
Grape drop, cold c..."I became drunk with every<br />Grape drop, cold crystal on my lips"<br /><br />Oh! I want to find you a publisher. The quality of work from bloggers never ceases to astound me.Matthew John Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09692136501131270216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-46786451884582325852012-03-08T03:43:27.943-05:002012-03-08T03:43:27.943-05:00love this, Heaven! and appreciate you sharing the ...love this, Heaven! and appreciate you sharing the poetry of Rumi!<br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-36986704782048599442012-03-04T03:57:43.450-05:002012-03-04T03:57:43.450-05:00this is yummy!this is yummy!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71584385699257446202012-03-02T10:59:23.377-05:002012-03-02T10:59:23.377-05:00Love the images you conjure up.Love the images you conjure up.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-84253048406224221172012-03-01T12:54:22.694-05:002012-03-01T12:54:22.694-05:00Wonderful words, excellent stuff!
Anna :o]Wonderful words, excellent stuff!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78040861584074018232012-03-01T05:15:00.102-05:002012-03-01T05:15:00.102-05:00She seduces us with words, oh how I love it.She seduces us with words, oh how I love it.Beth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-70811826992018664532012-03-01T03:47:28.802-05:002012-03-01T03:47:28.802-05:00Oh! how I love this opening:
Your words washed ov...Oh! how I love this opening:<br /><br />Your words washed over me<br />Like ice wine, sweeter than<br /><br />Plum nectar with a tinge of<br />Tropical mango and lycee <br /><br />I became drunk with every<br />Grape drop, cold crystal on my lips<br /><br />Quite simply, superb.James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78170722674203868162012-03-01T01:06:15.669-05:002012-03-01T01:06:15.669-05:00Beautiful.
I like the idea of words
or the ideas ...Beautiful.<br /><br />I like the idea of words<br />or the ideas in them<br />supplying us with a power<br />to drive away the darkness … <br />and on we write.Matt Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09276531398959895160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-59429189611352255512012-02-29T22:50:45.927-05:002012-02-29T22:50:45.927-05:00Hello again! I’ve given you a Liebster Blog Award....Hello again! I’ve given you a Liebster Blog Award. You can visit my blog to see what it’s all about. It’s nice to pass it on, but if you are not into that, it’s ok with me. Just a little something to let you know I appreciate you and your blog. <br />http://wp.me/p1sxZr-7V<br />EvaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22645296885249551302012-02-29T21:59:09.821-05:002012-02-29T21:59:09.821-05:00Oh my! I love:
He smelled your rage in my hair,
Th...Oh my! I love:<br />He smelled your rage in my hair,<br />The earth on my olive skin, <br /><br />Wonderfully sensual : )<br />-EvaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82176049373172861302012-02-29T15:59:09.043-05:002012-02-29T15:59:09.043-05:00great imagery...very enjoyable piece.
this line ...great imagery...very enjoyable piece. <br />this line grabbed at me for some reason: "Autumn labour of purple feet."Cathy Feasterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01302068829418562420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9120808711723623362012-02-29T14:25:53.553-05:002012-02-29T14:25:53.553-05:00He smelled your rage in my hair.... Vivid and vibr...He smelled your rage in my hair.... Vivid and vibrantAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88252644988617551642012-02-29T14:16:18.924-05:002012-02-29T14:16:18.924-05:00love the poem of rumi's and yours builds on th...love the poem of rumi's and yours builds on the seed of his idea. stanza 5 is especially powerful.shawnacyhttp://shawnacykiker.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-17732514884807564812012-02-29T12:34:42.690-05:002012-02-29T12:34:42.690-05:00This is clever- and containe many different interp...This is clever- and containe many different interpretations. I loved how short and sharp it was. The presence at the door could have been a leaving lover , or death, or imagination, or inspiration even! Really enjoyed how this skipped into gabbing a pen and starting writing- showing powerfully how writing can be an emotional outlet for all sorts of things! At least that's what I got from this- soz for rambling!stu mcp (hate & hope)http://www.poemsofhateandhope.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-85362023444033164792012-02-29T10:19:42.535-05:002012-02-29T10:19:42.535-05:00absolutely nice:)absolutely nice:)Gloria Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03055543111865966546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-23293932412746990982012-02-29T09:35:54.843-05:002012-02-29T09:35:54.843-05:00lovely, enjoyed how you carried forward from the p...lovely, enjoyed how you carried forward from the prompt. ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-37655227419066116432012-02-29T07:20:47.890-05:002012-02-29T07:20:47.890-05:00Lovely write ...thank you so much for sharing xLovely write ...thank you so much for sharing xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-50371823378329557342012-02-29T03:47:31.999-05:002012-02-29T03:47:31.999-05:00Beautiful words and imagery...delicious! "He ...Beautiful words and imagery...delicious! "He smelled your rage in my hair" is a terrific line!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2105981584387787052012-02-29T01:36:14.116-05:002012-02-29T01:36:14.116-05:00Vision aplenty ... enjoyed :)Vision aplenty ... enjoyed :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17957913294364310380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9178610191229176142012-02-28T23:02:33.458-05:002012-02-28T23:02:33.458-05:00Ah! Rumi--inspiration into your creativity. How ma...Ah! Rumi--inspiration into your creativity. How many times have we escaped death? Thank God we remember them, and not only those times we die. <br />Peacefully, <br />Stevesteveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78175384403957558372012-02-28T22:27:33.798-05:002012-02-28T22:27:33.798-05:00Being Canadian, I'm a great fan of ice wine, a...Being Canadian, I'm a great fan of ice wine, and I savored every word.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-85118537656420733782012-02-28T22:07:44.400-05:002012-02-28T22:07:44.400-05:00Love this post. Every word.Love this post. Every word.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82243850119607832362012-02-28T22:05:42.003-05:002012-02-28T22:05:42.003-05:00it's what we do, take the pen and start writin...it's what we do, take the pen and start writing<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/02/04/cliffhanger/" rel="nofollow">cliffhanger</a>zongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43440519800835551432012-02-28T21:31:32.523-05:002012-02-28T21:31:32.523-05:00No choice but to leave for Him when life is pulsat...No choice but to leave for Him when life is pulsating so wild!<br /><br />Very lively.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-56911986518962000552012-02-28T21:04:18.736-05:002012-02-28T21:04:18.736-05:00Beautifully done!Beautifully done!SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.com