tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post2553216693084421660..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Of temptationScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-11992953891522412022013-05-21T17:46:10.146-04:002013-05-21T17:46:10.146-04:00This poem grabbed a hold of me from beginning with...This poem grabbed a hold of me from beginning with the first three words. Nicely done! I can identify and understand...<br /><br />-Christopher <br /><br />www.HeadenElite.org<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12126965038515957319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14449098206051193852013-05-19T22:55:39.794-04:002013-05-19T22:55:39.794-04:00Lovely. Ah, this is the line I loved the best: &qu...Lovely. Ah, this is the line I loved the best: " take my hands away, i come undone . . ."Wyeth Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14362260758559640980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-84881802182034337252013-05-17T18:24:04.956-04:002013-05-17T18:24:04.956-04:00Oh, and LOL my McAfee Security popped up and warne...Oh, and LOL my McAfee Security popped up and warned "suspicous site for sexual content" when I clicked over here. So I KNOW you're doing it right over here in heaven, Heaven!!! :)<br /><br />xooxJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-15770682285999556732013-05-17T18:22:14.289-04:002013-05-17T18:22:14.289-04:00Oh those seas with wandering feet, I have sailed a...Oh those seas with wandering feet, I have sailed a few in my days.<br /><br />I like the 100 leaves in your arms line a lot.<br /><br />I am always graced to read your poems, Grace. Perfect respite from ordinary words.<br /><br />xooxoxJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42761430300698715452013-05-17T08:04:27.475-04:002013-05-17T08:04:27.475-04:00O, how beautiful, to reach down to the most import...O, how beautiful, to reach down to the most important part earned at great cost, and thankfully, very close to tree.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-29260515535268810682013-05-17T03:06:02.003-04:002013-05-17T03:06:02.003-04:00I too have tasted temptation from a Siren's so...I too have tasted temptation from a Siren's song.Ben Dittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637997946476963455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-51502074912403354022013-05-13T13:29:11.651-04:002013-05-13T13:29:11.651-04:00WOW! EXCELLENT PIECE GWOW! EXCELLENT PIECE Gashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33009974479622794772013-05-13T08:39:50.218-04:002013-05-13T08:39:50.218-04:00Temptations can be deadly if not resisted. Wonder...Temptations can be deadly if not resisted. Wonderful poem, Grace. Thank you! Hope you had a beautiful Mother's Day!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63813797036559858832013-05-13T02:01:42.680-04:002013-05-13T02:01:42.680-04:00a profound piece!a profound piece!Akilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10367262521387980950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79354763591762651772013-05-13T00:32:31.796-04:002013-05-13T00:32:31.796-04:00Lovely. I like the ending best - even when one fa...Lovely. I like the ending best - even when one falls to temptation, he learns and gets stronger to resist it. There is hope. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-358145170535428312013-05-12T19:28:07.583-04:002013-05-12T19:28:07.583-04:00This is great love the feel of this piece.This is great love the feel of this piece.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62357996644809800892013-05-12T10:36:37.128-04:002013-05-12T10:36:37.128-04:00"...but don't take my precious gift....ri..."...but don't take my precious gift....rising after each fall..."<br />I am reminded no one can take this precious gift away...:smilesMaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00216167544833329555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2886624501535860802013-05-12T09:15:08.210-04:002013-05-12T09:15:08.210-04:00Knowledge can be good... or bad. Wonderful write, ...Knowledge can be good... or bad. Wonderful write, Grace!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24944086844395954092013-05-12T07:30:51.746-04:002013-05-12T07:30:51.746-04:00So so beautiful and intricate Heaven, absolutely a...So so beautiful and intricate Heaven, absolutely adore this, great job!Outcasthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03400755239612162157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-1266515817781474082013-05-12T06:33:49.616-04:002013-05-12T06:33:49.616-04:00...our whole being is too fragile to resist tempta......our whole being is too fragile to resist temptations... but then it is the rising after we have fallen that defines a whole new being... a whole new you... stronger & bolder... smiles... this is excellent Grace... loved it!kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08116213800655914273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-64764204475957521922013-05-12T06:00:43.294-04:002013-05-12T06:00:43.294-04:00Yes, the knowledge of the self(s) is the beginning...Yes, the knowledge of the self(s) is the beginning of all wisdom. A fine poem.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7151794350555401882013-05-12T01:50:51.889-04:002013-05-12T01:50:51.889-04:00and sometimes, it's like a vacation to give in...and sometimes, it's like a vacation to give into temptation<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2013/05/11/sexy-hits-the-streets/" rel="nofollow">sexy hits the streets</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-50588200512376468532013-05-12T00:27:06.203-04:002013-05-12T00:27:06.203-04:00Interesting picture of choice to go along with thi...Interesting picture of choice to go along with this. Is it a Dryad?DWeihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01052727489537771147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2459376365887302942013-05-11T23:03:51.407-04:002013-05-11T23:03:51.407-04:00KNOWLEDGE IS THE BIGGEST TEMPTATION INDEED, FOR IT...KNOWLEDGE IS THE BIGGEST TEMPTATION INDEED, FOR IT IS THE SOURCE OF ALL OTHER TEMPTATIONS. NICE POEM, LOVED IT:)!!!Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71330307137517513112013-05-11T22:36:12.463-04:002013-05-11T22:36:12.463-04:00Love love love the imagery. The honey, fruit, leav...Love love love the imagery. The honey, fruit, leaves...and the ending is powerful. Nicely written.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13646917707699645492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83884107041375750192013-05-11T20:50:52.400-04:002013-05-11T20:50:52.400-04:00Love this line and the imagery:
my innermost fles...Love this line and the imagery:<br /><br />my innermost flesh, irresistible as a golden fruit-Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74298269680179431132013-05-11T20:01:47.655-04:002013-05-11T20:01:47.655-04:00the eye gate dif causes trouble... loved this, &qu...the eye gate dif causes trouble... loved this, " knowledge of who i am & can be, rising after each fall, " much wisdom here if we're looking upWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-70299955436979589482013-05-11T19:08:10.401-04:002013-05-11T19:08:10.401-04:00knowledge of who i am & can be, rising after e... knowledge of who i am & can be, rising after each fall, ... Love this line... Beautiful post Heaven ...1ManViewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17896979433381268598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88429614984000456102013-05-11T18:39:10.743-04:002013-05-11T18:39:10.743-04:00Really bac into sensual land of late at your gate,...Really bac into sensual land of late at your gate, all steamy is fine by this feline and great visuals too, happy weekend to youPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-27063653703764055842013-05-11T17:53:39.053-04:002013-05-11T17:53:39.053-04:00Great, the knowledge of who one is a precious gift...Great, the knowledge of who one is a precious gift indeed. What a lovely insight, I also think it gives us better insight on which temptations to indulge in, or which to resist.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com