tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post2420914896311516833..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Spring's brewScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-5257201833220404872014-03-24T12:51:25.699-04:002014-03-24T12:51:25.699-04:00Lovely ... and lush.Lovely ... and lush.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6566640968288762482014-03-24T09:23:05.046-04:002014-03-24T09:23:05.046-04:00Not only do I love this poem, I love the fact that...Not only do I love this poem, I love the fact that spring has finally arrived. Now, someone just needs to tell Mother Nature. I think she forgot. As always, thank you! Be well!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24712183735473790942014-03-23T02:41:49.579-04:002014-03-23T02:41:49.579-04:00Oh so sensual, sweet, and delicate for spring. I e...Oh so sensual, sweet, and delicate for spring. I especially enjoyed the beginning <br />"flame shaker".. <br />"The rain sprinkles. . . patting the soil into moist-delirium"<br /><br />and possibly my favorite line here: "my song-weaver, pour yourself into me, i'm your wine maker."<br />..Just sweetness ..smiles.<br /><br />LilaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-31507420422709197322014-03-22T00:31:26.926-04:002014-03-22T00:31:26.926-04:00wo9nderfully done, with great images...happy sprin...wo9nderfully done, with great images...happy spring time!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-48889227226997563882014-03-21T20:09:27.153-04:002014-03-21T20:09:27.153-04:00"Wrap me close, sheets of lavender, my song-w..."Wrap me close, sheets of lavender, my song-weaver<br />pour your sweet words into me, i'm your wine-maker<br /><br />Because today is first spring day<br />And the brew's heady with your southern-kisses."<br /><br />Beautiful ending to a lovely ode to spring. I am in that moment and I can smell the grass and feel the sun in your words. Lovely poem.The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52482768059602331192014-03-21T08:29:12.131-04:002014-03-21T08:29:12.131-04:00Wish you Happy Spring season !Wish you Happy Spring season !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4200599833927083532014-03-21T05:21:06.207-04:002014-03-21T05:21:06.207-04:00you really touched on a lot of senses here. it wa...you really touched on a lot of senses here. it was easy to get wrapped up in this piece...the kennings creating a nice collaboration of senses.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42885902677653008642014-03-21T03:59:55.830-04:002014-03-21T03:59:55.830-04:00I also love the evergreen windmill - nicely writte...I also love the evergreen windmill - nicely written all around, GraceKathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-35791007141861922902014-03-21T01:39:04.494-04:002014-03-21T01:39:04.494-04:00I love spring..and this is the first year..i can s...I love spring..and this is the first year..i can sense beauty..since i am healed of a 60 month stint of incredible pain..<br /><br />I'm loving every moment of these beautiful poems..most with tribute it seems to spring...<br /><br />A celebration this year for me..in so many ways..<br /><br />and with the pain comes words..and a new way to celebrate..<br />spring too..<br />as TRULY spring-ed alive..with the general and building creation activity ..<br />inspired <br />by<br />green..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26778616396264510722014-03-21T00:06:36.855-04:002014-03-21T00:06:36.855-04:00spring is in the air..............spring is in the air..............Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7918926655763048842014-03-20T22:36:52.022-04:002014-03-20T22:36:52.022-04:00nice - sounds like the author might be a fire-make...nice - sounds like the author might be a fire-maker too! This reminds me of how we come alive in spring.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44568193891558961282014-03-20T21:50:57.247-04:002014-03-20T21:50:57.247-04:00Now there is a brew I wouldn't mind getting in...Now there is a brew I wouldn't mind getting into lolPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6500094230562388562014-03-20T21:14:56.140-04:002014-03-20T21:14:56.140-04:00Mmmmhmmmm so good!Mmmmhmmmm so good!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-69605663971578336322014-03-20T20:51:53.962-04:002014-03-20T20:51:53.962-04:00Because today is first spring day
And the brew'...Because today is first spring day<br />And the brew's heady with your southern-kisses.<br /><br />So much to look forward to with Spring around the corner. Sensuously beautiful write Grace!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8513018065308952422014-03-20T20:00:02.303-04:002014-03-20T20:00:02.303-04:00Just beautiful and very creative kennings.Just beautiful and very creative kennings.Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08781684841036567770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-86679494099749132082014-03-20T19:42:37.721-04:002014-03-20T19:42:37.721-04:00evergreen-windmill, cinnamon-clouds... lovely ken...evergreen-windmill, cinnamon-clouds... lovely kennings, Grace!<br /><br />esp loved <br /><br />"pour your sweet words into me, i'm your wine-maker" clever... smilesAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2921843375698060192014-03-20T19:30:26.137-04:002014-03-20T19:30:26.137-04:00beautiful ode to spring! luscious!beautiful ode to spring! luscious!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14800739458417077042014-03-20T19:28:16.770-04:002014-03-20T19:28:16.770-04:00Spring awakens the senses...beautiful kennings, es...Spring awakens the senses...beautiful kennings, especially like "cinnamon-clouds" and southern-kisses"...yum!lynn__https://www.blogger.com/profile/03991892804149727665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-66395115289954970732014-03-20T18:54:18.157-04:002014-03-20T18:54:18.157-04:00Lovely Grace, a great tribute to spring arriving a...Lovely Grace, a great tribute to spring arriving and the opportunities that present to life and love.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07512953735819338268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-76733667980967779082014-03-20T18:42:59.415-04:002014-03-20T18:42:59.415-04:00what a lovely way to celebrate the beginning of Sp...what a lovely way to celebrate the beginning of Spring! DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22566105239935087202014-03-20T18:38:49.884-04:002014-03-20T18:38:49.884-04:00"The sun is a flame-shaker " Great begin..."The sun is a flame-shaker " Great beginning, Grace, and followed by many vibrant word pictures. Very nice use of kennings.<br />vb holmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18042714310345407971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-64503305113713210162014-03-20T17:40:40.575-04:002014-03-20T17:40:40.575-04:00Ah, spring. Hallelujah! Song-weavers and wine-make...Ah, spring. Hallelujah! Song-weavers and wine-makers rejoice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24661784122935520732014-03-20T17:38:49.029-04:002014-03-20T17:38:49.029-04:00dewy-grower, etc ... you do this like a pro! Clin...dewy-grower, etc ... you do this like a pro! Clingy and sweet images as tasty as a ripe peach. Yum. I could hardly smell the honey for all the cinnamon, my favorite spice.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-233007951710877072014-03-20T17:25:57.610-04:002014-03-20T17:25:57.610-04:00Spring breezes have blown away the gray bellies in...Spring breezes have blown away the gray bellies in the overcast morning, and electric-blue sun-breaks, low temps (45) beckon me to first the deck, then the backyard; you rocked the prompt; liked the idea of /moist-delirium/, a state I love to help my wife attain. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-65061454422948108052014-03-20T17:17:45.085-04:002014-03-20T17:17:45.085-04:00I love your use of fragrance to evoke spring. We o...I love your use of fragrance to evoke spring. We often focus on what we see, not enough on other senses. And who wouldn't love the company of a song-weaver?Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.com