tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post2287565261611796243..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: SnowflakeScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger44125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61927980973234950862014-02-27T15:35:03.702-05:002014-02-27T15:35:03.702-05:00This was truly poetry in motion Grace-loved the im...This was truly poetry in motion Grace-loved the imagery and the last four lines made me smile:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26881293990342509212014-02-27T13:16:59.836-05:002014-02-27T13:16:59.836-05:00Breath taking. Wow...Breath taking. Wow...Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88777823566277573872014-02-27T12:29:00.764-05:002014-02-27T12:29:00.764-05:00absolutely gorgeous metaphor Grace!absolutely gorgeous metaphor Grace!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2104729102214735682014-02-27T11:00:02.449-05:002014-02-27T11:00:02.449-05:00'Yet all of Fate is a tailspin'...the true...'Yet all of Fate is a tailspin'...the truest thing I've read in a long while.Ron Shieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15906697750712674256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-36231914082536204142014-02-27T10:07:26.790-05:002014-02-27T10:07:26.790-05:00aww, my only certainly, you. I love that.
I was...aww, my only certainly, you. I love that.<br /><br />I was talking to my mom-in-law the other day. She said the snowflakes were so large the other day, you could make out the shapes. Wild! As always, thank you! Beautiful weekend to you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-81181777072273306652014-02-26T18:02:11.816-05:002014-02-26T18:02:11.816-05:00This is lovely...melts on the tongue :)This is lovely...melts on the tongue :)Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-17258595308916665002014-02-26T17:10:54.328-05:002014-02-26T17:10:54.328-05:00love this. Especially the very last line which ma...love this. Especially the very last line which makes this about so much more than just a snowflake!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-69683297176162950142014-02-26T14:19:58.635-05:002014-02-26T14:19:58.635-05:00Quite the description....wish I had written that o...Quite the description....wish I had written that one ;)Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39964105766544087912014-02-26T14:06:13.070-05:002014-02-26T14:06:13.070-05:00Lovely - the metaphoric showflake melting into you...Lovely - the metaphoric showflake melting into you. Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-12348463552678451312014-02-26T13:45:59.983-05:002014-02-26T13:45:59.983-05:00This is just beautiful. Just when I was so sick o...This is just beautiful. Just when I was so sick of winter I didn't think anything could change that, your poem has melted my heart for snow again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9633110141210466442014-02-26T11:36:45.861-05:002014-02-26T11:36:45.861-05:00I liked your write a lot. Fav is one thing matters...I liked your write a lot. Fav is one thing matters is melting you. Lovely.seasideauthor (Sharon Rose Thomas.)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00089412012803282099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-16947100454107074242014-02-26T11:30:20.135-05:002014-02-26T11:30:20.135-05:00Nice poem!
It has been a bit too dry over here, s...Nice poem! <br />It has been a bit too dry over here, so I am missing the snow. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60945839898521099782014-02-26T09:22:23.725-05:002014-02-26T09:22:23.725-05:00Wow, Wow Wow
The gravity of Longing, the pull of F...Wow, Wow Wow<br />The gravity of Longing, the pull of Falling in Gravity's field of play.<br />Love of God, love of partner, children -- what is not LOVE?<br />Let us not resist the call when it comes.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-18270192476444520242014-02-26T08:21:33.544-05:002014-02-26T08:21:33.544-05:00Oh my, this is just wonderful... love the way you ...Oh my, this is just wonderful... love the way you spin it down just like flakes falling... and I love the meeting of science and art, and these lines:<br />Yet all of Fate is a tailspin<br /> Between sky to ground<br />perfection!mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-23666231550652818622014-02-26T07:39:24.295-05:002014-02-26T07:39:24.295-05:00Grace,
This is a wonderful composition...from the ...Grace,<br />This is a wonderful composition...from the first, it propels us through a cascade of images. <br />For me, this style and form instantiates the tailspin you write of in the last verse. We are drawn inevitably to the conclusion. This is very artful and polished (as always) and in terms of the impact of the whole, I think it's one of your best.<br />SteveSteve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7219264323781006832014-02-26T05:20:37.373-05:002014-02-26T05:20:37.373-05:00After being away for some time, it's such a de...After being away for some time, it's such a delight to read how you've grown as a poet. This is rich and complex and multi-tiered, light and unique as a snowflake that melts on a lover's tongue. Fine stuff.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88686956180196598272014-02-26T02:08:54.034-05:002014-02-26T02:08:54.034-05:00Much warmth emerges from words on snowflakes Grace...Much warmth emerges from words on snowflakes Grace ~ and those last three lines… what can I say..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7957963184570305552014-02-26T01:56:43.704-05:002014-02-26T01:56:43.704-05:00Individual snowflakes are magical - it's just ...Individual snowflakes are magical - it's just when they pile up that the trouble starts.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-20130585014434592152014-02-25T23:48:07.351-05:002014-02-25T23:48:07.351-05:00This is beautiful Grace. Like a snowflake itself...This is beautiful Grace. Like a snowflake itself, original and unique. Of course I love the last lines.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-84939143910445949622014-02-25T22:39:35.588-05:002014-02-25T22:39:35.588-05:00I love the last lines of 'the only certainty i...I love the last lines of 'the only certainty in melting is you'......beautiful conclusion. I really enjoyed this poem. Your rhythm was perfect. I flowed all the way through. Laura Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02063154517087393398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78200473550245006242014-02-25T22:10:29.901-05:002014-02-25T22:10:29.901-05:00Your words like the image of snow flake: graceful ...Your words like the image of snow flake: graceful and pointy ~ love the playfulness in last words :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-51793355654613635652014-02-25T22:01:01.180-05:002014-02-25T22:01:01.180-05:00Oh how delicious. As a mathematician and scientis...Oh how delicious. As a mathematician and scientist, word nerd and writer, this just brought all those facets together. So nice.<br />Tina @ <a href="http://kmdlifeisgood.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Life is Good</a><br />Tinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08925730745204736744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-59816203663787161252014-02-25T19:45:01.220-05:002014-02-25T19:45:01.220-05:00A snowflake is beauty..a lot happens between sky a...A snowflake is beauty..a lot happens between sky and ground..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-81037510748290956682014-02-25T17:50:20.139-05:002014-02-25T17:50:20.139-05:00love the parallels you created between nature and ...love the parallels you created between nature and romance... great write Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80864487414192114522014-02-25T17:48:34.153-05:002014-02-25T17:48:34.153-05:00Always love your work Grace! Such a pleasure to re...Always love your work Grace! Such a pleasure to read!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.com