tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post1669652053020202491..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Native heartScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger66125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58005353020702245642012-04-22T20:50:27.538-04:002012-04-22T20:50:27.538-04:00really beautiful!really beautiful!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-23342697042047011722012-04-21T13:17:50.696-04:002012-04-21T13:17:50.696-04:00gorgeous. read it several times. words like seeds....gorgeous. read it several times. words like seeds...Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79123284974980705962012-04-21T06:21:59.917-04:002012-04-21T06:21:59.917-04:00Heavenly Heaven. I love the physical shape and the...Heavenly Heaven. I love the physical shape and the shape of your words. Amazing.<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42366203186700217842012-04-21T06:21:05.931-04:002012-04-21T06:21:05.931-04:00Astonishingly original poem. One of the coolest th...Astonishingly original poem. One of the coolest things I've seen in the blogosphere. And just look at all these well-deserved comments. :)Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2478191552672723522012-04-19T12:36:52.860-04:002012-04-19T12:36:52.860-04:00It flows so smoothly in a cascading like manner. I...It flows so smoothly in a cascading like manner. It follows how we view a person that we care, progressively a little a time!<br /><br />Hank<br />.kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-51765586151992976932012-04-19T03:33:27.894-04:002012-04-19T03:33:27.894-04:00CurvaceousCurvaceousAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17957913294364310380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-38617276164784750752012-04-18T21:05:42.291-04:002012-04-18T21:05:42.291-04:00This lovely. sustained, lilting primal cry. Stunn...This lovely. sustained, lilting primal cry. Stunning.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34680945594173367912012-04-18T13:40:53.606-04:002012-04-18T13:40:53.606-04:00Nourishing native heart
Very nice!Nourishing native heart<br /><br />Very nice!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06411710113371026360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42094998893569631302012-04-18T11:06:51.043-04:002012-04-18T11:06:51.043-04:00A lovely shape poem that really does express what ...A lovely shape poem that really does express what looking at another person you love is like. They do seem to segment, break up into drops, each reflecting on its surface just a little of the depth of the person inside. What a wonderfully novel way of expressing it. Love the inventions of your mind! So impressed!!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-75690098129225977562012-04-18T07:26:45.877-04:002012-04-18T07:26:45.877-04:00From a bloom to a seed...what lovely bookend for t...From a bloom to a seed...what lovely bookend for this verse. I'm drawn into the wavey form, too. Eased through your images from start to finish. This is a very nice piece. Good work.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-73688106333033540252012-04-18T05:19:19.261-04:002012-04-18T05:19:19.261-04:00Great marriage of form and feeling. This possesses...Great marriage of form and feeling. This possesses a subbtle and compelling sensuality.James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-47659115184357368232012-04-18T04:06:19.203-04:002012-04-18T04:06:19.203-04:00nice.. i like the swept in the tide .. In fragment...nice.. i like the swept in the tide .. In fragments.. feeling in your words and mirrored in the movement of the form again..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-70360094462980215222012-04-18T03:21:11.539-04:002012-04-18T03:21:11.539-04:00I like much the form and sway of your poem. Evoca...I like much the form and sway of your poem. Evocative and very sensuous. Nice work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42326904937004036612012-04-17T22:58:13.151-04:002012-04-17T22:58:13.151-04:00This is wonderful, alive and erotic. Thanks.This is wonderful, alive and erotic. Thanks.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71757823929753258712012-04-17T22:41:13.169-04:002012-04-17T22:41:13.169-04:00This is a HOT write. I love it! Every single lette...This is a HOT write. I love it! Every single letter. I can't pick out one part to quote....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10094116226854880072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-59934425290854743112012-04-17T22:37:01.167-04:002012-04-17T22:37:01.167-04:00Light
Sound
Electricity
Motion
and Love
all move i...Light<br />Sound<br />Electricity<br />Motion<br />and Love<br />all move in waves. . .Felthttp://poetcolette.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-70936696683449962542012-04-17T22:33:52.616-04:002012-04-17T22:33:52.616-04:00This is so beautiful. i love it. The passion rides...This is so beautiful. i love it. The passion rides on your wave, carrying us along with it.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44170416981924755962012-04-17T22:05:01.939-04:002012-04-17T22:05:01.939-04:00First of all, the shape of this is fantastic. And ...First of all, the shape of this is fantastic. And the words themselves are gorgeous, too.De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-54585373347327318922012-04-17T21:55:17.811-04:002012-04-17T21:55:17.811-04:00Wonderful shaping! K.Wonderful shaping! K.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88464807930255381252012-04-17T20:18:54.842-04:002012-04-17T20:18:54.842-04:00Undulating.
Timeless.
Primal.
Soothing.
Real.
...Undulating.<br /><br />Timeless.<br /><br />Primal.<br /><br />Soothing.<br /><br />Real.<br /><br />5 words off the top of my head this poem brings to mind.Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-90611509744158232342012-04-17T20:18:46.400-04:002012-04-17T20:18:46.400-04:00Very sensual. Reminds me of:
"Grrreat Love: ...Very sensual. Reminds me of:<br /><br />"Grrreat Love: Grip Grunt Grind Growl Gravity. It pulls you into me." a poem I wrote years ago.colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19212722798048329922012-04-17T19:39:47.731-04:002012-04-17T19:39:47.731-04:00I love how you used the physical form of your poem...I love how you used the physical form of your poem to reflect your words. Very organic.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-90728744667759052262012-04-17T19:28:43.523-04:002012-04-17T19:28:43.523-04:00Girl, you have a way about you! I loved the curve...Girl, you have a way about you! I loved the curved presentation, the tone of your lines, the soft voice, and the passion of intent. Just a lovely piece. This could be set nicely to cello. Inspiring.henry clemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2012/04/16/i-love-you/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-12810382181150360152012-04-17T19:07:42.207-04:002012-04-17T19:07:42.207-04:00Beautifully done.
KBeautifully done.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72956155203695688642012-04-17T18:43:55.271-04:002012-04-17T18:43:55.271-04:00Such rich words throughout the entire poem...I lov...Such rich words throughout the entire poem...I love this, <br /><br />" Follows not the arc of the sun<br /><br /> But the curve of your hips"<br /><br />I enjoyed that!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.com