Tuesday, 12 April 2011

I believe you

when you said that
i was really beautiful
when you gazed upon 
the very core of me

i believe you


when you said that 
i was like a pink flower  
in full bloom after  
your touch and kisses 


i believe you 


when you said that
i was like warm honey
overflowing your cup
after our lovemaking   


i believe you

then
why do you have
to leave me ?







picture credit:  houseoferotica.tumblr






7 comments:

  1. A question asked by almost everyone, at one time or another in our life time... i read somewere that it was better to be loved once, then not at alll. Sounded good, but?.... A sobering poem, enjoyed it...

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  2. agree with you.... thanks for your comment.

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  3. oh trust me the leaving is never easy...but doesnt it give all the more ardor to the return? smiles.

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  4. Don't believe and it will be challenging enough to stay back!

    Thought provoking poem.

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  5. IF you're talking about him "leaving" just after lovemaking,
    that's a physiological thing he can't help.

    IF he LEFT you, well, that was just all up in his, um, head. :(

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  6. Beautiful poem.

    You know what? I've written something on the similar lines. Leaving a link if you wish to read.

    http://abhrapal.in/en/archives/370

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